Lies

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    Burningsoul

    Burningsoul Well-Known Member

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    Just like them i find im short of breath again
    Cus you wish upon me death again
    Try and slow down and catch myself again
    But you overwhelm and over come me again
    Ive been stripped of my pride, stripped of my life
    Stripped of everythin i ever wanted deep inside
    All of my dreams have shattered and died
    And all of this is down to you and your lies

    Get out of my sight! erase my mind of you
    Get out of my sight! erase the thoughts of you
    Get out of my sight! erase the past of you
    Im sick of your lies! and everythin you did inside

    I feel it eat away from inside of me again
    This is all because you lied to me again
    I wanna forget it all and become me again
    But you overwhelm and overcome me again
    Ive been stripped of my pride, stripped of my life
    Stripped of everythin i ever wanted deep inside
    All of my dreams have shattered and died
    And all of this is down to you and your lies

    Get out of my sight! erase my mind of you
    Get out of my sight! erase the thoughts of you
    Get out of my sight! erase the past of you
    Im sick of your lies! and everythin you did inside

    Get out of my sight! erase my mind of you
    Get out of my sight! erase the thoughts of you
    Get out of my sight! erase the past of you
    Im sick of your lies! and everythin you did inside

    Get out of my sight! ive been stripped of my pride
    Get out of my sight! ive been stripped of my life
    Get out of my sight! my dreams have all died
    Get out of my sight! its down to you and your lies
    IM SICK OF YOUR LIES!
     
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    bex_luvin_ian

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    hiya
    dnt think its as gd as ur other i read was bt still gd 4 ritin ur self!
    ever thurt of ritin 4 a band r startin 1? xxx
     
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    Burningsoul

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    cheerz :D finally some feedback, me and my mates were thinkin bout startin a band which is why i wrote these lyrics, but then they dropped out, so i just do it for fun now.
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    just find somebody commited enough! if you can make music, why not? or look for a band that exists but they might be looking for somebody, dont know if you play an instrument or sing, but if some band near you are looking for somebody with input you can give, give it a shot!!!!
     
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    Burningsoul

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    Cheerz again and thanx for the support. There is this band i know at my school and i get along with them, but they have a female singer and i can only rap, not really a good combination is it :unsure:
     
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    Adam

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    Good job with your lyrics mate ^_^
     
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    Soulcrasher-X

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    Cool work Burningsoul ^^
     
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    Burningsoul

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    ^_^ Thanx again to all of you who have commented on the lyrics, i appreciate it.
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    Cheerz again and thanx for the support. There is this band i know at my school and i get along with them, but they have a female singer and i can only rap, not really a good combination is it :unsure: [/b][/quote]
    what you mean, they have a singer and you can rap, not a good combo, it can be done together, there are plenty of records out there that use both! i guess the guys you mentioned might not be playing kind of music that blends them like that, but keep looking! plenty more fishes in the sea. or you can even make your way as a poet, be it by being published or self published.
     
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    Burningsoul

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    what you mean, they have a singer and you can rap, not a good combo, it can be done together, there are plenty of records out there that use both! i guess the guys you mentioned might not be playing kind of music that blends them like that, but keep looking! plenty more fishes in the sea. or you can even make your way as a poet, be it by being published or self published. [/b][/quote]
    Neh their style doesnt mix well with rap so i guess i will keep lookin, and as for bein a poet, i guess that is an option, thanx for the support
     

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