Leave-Me-Alone

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    Luke

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    When I look into the mirror
    I don't like what I see
    A slave to the world
    Livin' to everythin you want me to be
    When I try my best
    And it aint good enough
    I say screw you
    And well thats tough
    Cos I am what I am
    I am nothin else
    You don't know my thoughts
    That I think to myself
    Sure I'm alone
    But I'll have someone one day
    And until that day comes
    I don't give a f*ck what you say
    Cos I am who I am
    And nothing more
    So I raise my middle finger to you
    While I walk out the door

    Why Should I care?
    Why Do You Stare at me?
    Just leave me be
    Let me be myself
    Leave me to be alone

    It aint a careless life at all
    Its either win,lose or fall
    But when the day comes
    That I'll stop being a slave
    I'll leave you
    To cry
    In your own grave
    Cos you might think I'm yours
    But I differ on that
    Thats your opinion
    Its not a fact
    And until you prove
    That I belong to you
    I'll just sit back here
    And not listen to you!

    Why Should I care?
    Why Do You Stare at me?
    Just leave me be
    Let me be myself
    Leave me to be alone

    Sitting here alone
    Sitting here alone
    Why should I care?

    Sobbing away
    Wasting my entire life away
    Well Its better than me giving in to you!

    I will cut myself free from the grip that you're killin' me with
    I will cut myself free from the grip that you're killin' me with
    I WILL CUT MYSELF FREE FROM YOU!

    Why Should I care?
    Why Do You Stare at me?
    Just leave me be
    Let me be myself
    Leave me to be alone

    Why Should I care?
    Why Do You Stare at me?
    Just leave me be
    Let me be myself
    Leave me to be alone

    Cut Myself free from you
    (Leave me alone)
    Cut myself free from you
    (leave me alone)
    Cut myself free from you
    (leave me alone)
    Cut myself free...
    leave me alone!
     
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    Evil Angel

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    I wrote something similar but my band members rejected it saying it involved a lotta cussing :D . R u a vocalist of a band or something cause its great for a song.but some parts seem as though it was copied from Part of me
     
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    Razan

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    Amazing lyrics, very good!

    I didn't think of that until now :unsure: Nah, very little of it was copied.
     
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    Joe

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    I wouldn't say copied from, more like inspired by.
     
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    Luke

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    Yeah I did get the cut myself free bit from part of me but as uncle raj sed I was inspired by it.

    And to answer your quiestion rohan yes I'm a vocalist for my band,I'm also an emcee in the band so I'm a little of mike and chester :lol:

    But thanks for the comments ^_^
     
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    Razan

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    Loved that... :mellow: ...touched me!
    :lol:
     
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    Luke

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    :lol:
    Glad it...um...yeah
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    i wouldnt say either it was copied, could see the inspiration, i do it myself (but not to lyrics, just me poems), but personally when inspired by something of someone else i reword it even better so it becomes 'mine to the bone', but on the other hand it was great enough even if bits seemed like an echo of LP. and the message, just brilliant. people who dont let you be who you are are well disrespectful and should be shown the door.
     
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    Luke

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    The Cut myself free bit of those lyrics are kind of taken from 'Par Of Me' but its more of an inspiration rather then a copy

    Thanks for the comments ^_^
     
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    Burningsoul

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    i think we have gathered that it was partly inspired by part of me (which rules) but it is a good set of lyrics anyway, i loved them. By the way can some 1 comment on mine some time please :D
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^ and yes I will comment on your writings
     

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