Payback

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    Luke

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    I watch you and you watch me
    The tension builds and consiquently
    I lash out out you for all you've done
    You sold my pride well you've done wrong
    My payback is now,You better freak
    cos when we're standin on the mountains peak
    There wont be a soul to take your fall
    I'll make you feel you're 2 inches tall
    I've looked away too many times
    Now the time is mine to recite my lines
    Before I kick your ass at your own game
    Its time to step up to your 15 minutes of fame
    Cos once you step up,there aint no turning back
    After this you'll be seein black
    And hit after hit,blow after blow
    You'll wish you didn't mouth off your show
    Payback is nice revenge is so very sweet
    I'll kick your ass while bobbing to the beat!

    You think your somethin special?
    You think that you can talk smack
    Well no more bullsh*t from your mouth
    Cos this is my packback

    So you arrived b*tch,thats progress
    But after this you might be dead
    I'm just warnin you now,before you back out
    Before you have your scream and shout
    Its a mans game now,aint no sh*t
    No P*ssing around you gotta grab your wits
    Cos you talk smack to me and your done
    Cos one too many times I've tuned the same song
    My violence will be out of control
    This aint an afternoon stroll
    I'm for real ,I'm makin you fake
    You should of thought about all the choices you make
    Cos when Sh*t like this goes down
    The only thing you can do is frown and wait to be taken down
    Don't make a sound of the lies and the decete
    Because you're gonna get knocked off your feet
    Payback is nice revenge is so very sweet
    I'll kick your ass while bobbing to the beat!

    You think your somethin special?
    You think that you can talk smack
    Well no more bullsh*t from your mouth
    Cos this is my packback

    You think your somethin special?
    You think that you can talk smack
    Well no more bullsh*t from your mouth
    Cos this is my packback

    I want my dignity
    Something you took away from me
    I don't want to raise my fists
    Why did you have to do this
    I want my peace
    But my peace is broken
    My peace is broken
    My peace is broken!
    Now you must pay!

    (I want my dignity...)
    You think your somethin special?
    You think that you can talk smack
    (You took away from me...)
    Well no more bullsh*t from your mouth
    Cos this is my packback
    (I want my peace)

    (I want my dignity...)
    You think your somethin special?
    You think that you can talk smack
    (You took away from me...)
    Well no more bullsh*t from your mouth
    Cos this is my packback
    (I want my peace)
    I want my peace but you crossed a line and now its payback!
     
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    Evil Angel

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    man your are great with lyrics.I take a good 7 days to write lyrics(More time if the rest of the band doesn't want me cussing ^_^ )

    Keep it up dude!
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^
     
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    Luke

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    Any more comments?
     
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    Phantasm

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    Sorta reminds me of this this song ;P
    It's not bad though, I like it. Nice and Hit The Floor-ish. However, I'd suggest you improve your typing skills a little ;)
     
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    Luke

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    These lyrics were not influenced by those lyrics or Hit The Floor but thanks for the comments

    nd yEs I defnaetly nead 2 1mprve me writng skllsz :lol:
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    you got some spelling mistakes there, but who cares? the rhymes are good, the flow is going real cool, as i said be4, shame i cant hear the music to it, i hope the music is well angry to it as the lyrics are, although in few places they give in to the victim pose rather then the 'you pissed me off right now so i am gonna wipe the floor with you.' but you doin real good. keep at it!
     
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    Luke

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    Just a little pointer;If there are any words that would end with a g and the g isn't there thats normal

    Thanks for the comments ^_^
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    it wasnt about the g words, one i found was decete, is deceit, but as i said it doesnt really matter if you got your spelling wrong to me. i like your stuff anyways. i throwen some of mine in. ;) there maybe more mistakes there then in yours, check out and let me know!
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks for that ^_^


    And this is less than one month old so it doesn't count as necroposting :p
     

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