L053r

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    jmj

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    L053r
    Author: James Butler 11-19-2004 9:59 am
    Verse
    I sit and wait for decision to make themselves
    As the pain ignites
    You have me on a string
    Like your puppet you make me dance
    Without giving me a chance to say how I feel
    Because your confused
    And I have to choose whether to leave you or stay
    Chorus
    What's wrong why do I have to chose
    I Lose always when the choice is mine
    I'm out of time
    And Sh*t out of Luck
    I guess I have to Lose
    Verse
    I stare in your eyes
    All get back is anger
    Built from years of mistrust
    You agree with me
    This isn't how should be
    I'm close to you but you're so far away me
    I look in your eyes and all have to say
    Won't come out....
    I won't allow myself to degrade after what we made
    And you've become a monster feeding complements
    And accomplishments that you haven't really made on your own
    I'd tried to give you a hand but instead made you a Frankenstein
    You sit and whine until some takes care of you
    Afraid to do what I should
    I can't equate my problems now all I know is....
    Bridge
    I guess to you I'm just someone to step
    A white pawn in a wicked game of chess
    The Answers yes if you asked me to move I would
    But I can't leave your pain or mine
    It's strange to look behind myself see you as someone else
    Not the person I've come to love but as growing darkness
    Afraid to better yourself bouncing to me from someone else
    Next it will be my turn lose
    I know who in your mind next I'm taking all bets to see if I'm wrong
    I'm probably not you treat my as you've heard through countless words I'm just a f*cking Loser
    Chorus
    What's wrong why do I have to chose
    I Lose always when the choice is mine
    I'm out of time
    And Sh*t out of Luck
    I guess I have to Lose
    Verse3/Ending
    There's something you're not telling me
    You yell at me to vindicate your pain onto someone else
    If this is how it has to be
    Then it should be me if you put you through pain or anguish
    The language I'm trying to speak is love but it's to weak
    To make a dent in hear overcast by darkness
    But apart from this we need each other but I'm still confused
    On why it's me that has to lose......
     
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    jmj

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    Does anyone have any critiques or advice?
     
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    The Doctor

    The Doctor I wear a fez now. Fez's are cool. LPA Super Member

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    People arent going to respond right away. Calm down and give it time.
     

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