Weak Skills

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    LigerZeroShneider

    LigerZeroShneider Well-Known Member

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    [Final]

    I stand here by my mic
    Spitting out verse after verse
    Winning every battle I’m in
    Cuz they don’t know when I strike
    I call it a gift some call it a curse
    My mouth just goes off
    Once the record starts to spin

    Sometimes I can’t be contained
    Ain’t nobody can trained
    For my rapid verses
    So fast
    It’s like a bullet blast
    That can’t be surpassed

    [chorus]
    Your weak skills will never improve
    While you don’t have anything to prove
    I dare you to come back and battle me again
    And each try will end in vain

    This is my style
    I’m so versatile
    Rapping freestyle
    My rhymes are so hostile

    [chorus]

    I’m a natural at this
    With a huge rhyme vocabulary
    And I know how to reminisce
    I can get you weary
    Slowing down your rhymes
    Causing you to overuse sometimes

    Over and over my rhymes has flow
    Causing you to show
    Your incapability skill
    And you’ll never learn it until
    You master the rhymes

    [chorus]

    Over and Over
    Your verses sound the same
    In the end you got nobody to blame
    But yourself
    For not improving your rhyme
    Time after time.
     
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    Dark Knight

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    :mike: it's pretty good so far, keep at it, hope it ends as good as it starts
     
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    LigerZeroShneider

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    Thanks for that comment. I added chorus, and 2 more verses. I'm nicknamed Lyrical Mike for a reason.
     
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    Dark Knight

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    Lyrical Mike huh, can't argue with that, you're flow is on point man :mike:
    how long did it take you to write this, and what drives you to write?
     
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    LigerZeroShneider

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    To write.... 30 minutes with a few breaks here and there. Um... my life basically, I like writing to get out ideas and stuff.
     
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    saunderitos

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    that was awesum
    even though i hate rap it was good.
    you could get a few better rhymes (cant be bothered to quote sorry)
    but id say 9/10
     
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    LigerZeroShneider

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    Yeah, it kinda hard to get rhymes to fit to the flow I'm rewriting parts here and there when I over read it.
     
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    Razan

    Razan SUGAAAR!

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    It's amazing I like it alot.

    BTW Limp Bizkit did something like this too but Mike's (both) way better.
    It's called: "Gimme the mic".
    Take it as a compliment if I say you're better than Fred Durst no offence to the people who like him ;)

    I espicially like that line did you make it up because umm....I think I heard this somewhere before can't remember where but I'm sure I heard it.
     
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    LigerZeroShneider

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    I think I might have heard it before too, when you listen to music some lines just get sucked in to you. I think it was Jay-Z, he did have an album called the Gift and the Curse
     
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    x3r09

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    i was just thinking when you said:

    " Sometimes I can’t be contained
    Ain’t nobody can trained
    For my rapid verses
    So fast
    It’s like a bullet blast
    That can’t be surpassed"

    that stood out to me as like something that twista would rap about.

    yeah it's good! :D
     
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    LigerZeroShneider

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    Yup, my mouth is pretty quick. Sometimes to quick...
     

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