I Have A Dream

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    Luke

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    (Martin luther king speech as the music starts to play:)
    I have a dream that one day little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls and walk together as sisters and brothers.

    Back in the days
    Of the rasist ways
    When people linched others
    just to have their say
    It was a time of volence
    A time of crime
    Humanity cries
    While the judge just sighs
    The sherrif relaxes and sits on his ass
    While so fast
    These people are trashed
    Like the scum of the earth
    Like Satan himself
    F*ck you sherrif and The judge aswell
    Todays society is the real hell
    One slip of word and you're locked in a cell
    Until the demons themselves let you out
    While day after day you scream and you shout
    But no one hears you
    The people are scared to
    Because big brothers watchin you to
    24/7 this is their heaven
    Pollititons promising lies
    After 9/11
    Well one day I dream of a world
    Where kids and grown ups can all be heard
    It aint cool that theres a dictator for a democracy
    So C'mon people and rebell with me!

    I have a dream
    Of a world
    where no one is scared
    Paradise we will live
    No nightmares
    So get prepared
    and Don't be afraid
    Cos the dream is soon
    So wipe your tears away

    Sure back then it was hell for some
    But the 21st century aint that different
    Its still hell
    From zero to twelve
    Those people would let their souls be sold
    (If they had them)
    We Lead an army
    To see clearly
    Into our own destiny
    Not what these pollititons want
    Who want you to die unless you get millions
    It aint about your talent in mind
    Its not about being happy and kind
    Its about the money,the faces on paper
    Thats why the planes went into skyscrapers
    Money roots all evil ways
    Day after day
    People are slayed
    We mark their graves
    Cos of the men in grey
    Who want to rule our lives
    Well this is what I say...

    I have a dream
    Of a world
    where no one is scared
    Paradise we will live
    No nightmares
    So get prepared
    and Don't be afraid
    Cos the dream is soon
    So wipe your tears away

    Just Don't be afraid
    Just don't be afraid
    Just don't be afraid
    You have a right to what you say

    Just Don't be afraid
    Just don't be afraid
    Just don't be afraid
    You have a right to what you say

    This is a democracy
    Can't you see
    We are human beings
    We're not your slaves
    We're not no ones
    F*ck you capitalist,communist b***ards
    I'll let my voice Out so I can be heard
    I'LL LET MY VOICE OUT SO I CAN BE HEARD

    I have a dream
    Of a world
    where no one is scared
    Paradise we will live
    No nightmares
    So get prepared
    and Don't be afraid
    Cos the dream is soon
    So wipe your tears away

    I have a dream
     
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    Dark Knight

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    wow I liked it a lot, it was very real and insightfull. As i read the piece I could actually see the people you were talking about in my mind, thats kinda weird ^_^

    Any way I think it was cool that you wrote the peice around a Martin Luther King concept, it shows that you can build off of a single idea. Keep up the work. :mike:
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks alot ^_^
     
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    It's good, but you spelled racist and violence wrong :)
     
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    Luke

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    Oh yeah :lol:
     
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    it's original. which is a long-lost art. great stuff!
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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