This idea of mine sort of blends the two songs together. Enjoy: <HIGH VOLTAGE REMIX INTRO> <DEDICATED BACKING> (Hybrid) I have a dream of a scene between the green hills Clouds pull away and the sunlight's revealed People don't talk about keepin' it real (It's understood that they actually will) <SCRATCHES> Invented the mic so I could start blessing it Chin checkin' kids to make my point like an impressionist Many men have tried to shake us But I twist mic cords through double helixes and show them what I'm made of I buckle knees like leg braces Cast a spell of instrumentalness on all of you emcees who hate us (So you can try on) we'll leave you without a shoulder to cry on From now to infinity, let icons be bygones Meanwhile, I just grip my mic And hope me and my team make it through alright Because say what you will, and say what you might But don't ignore who it's for at the end of the night (Because) (This is dedicated to) <SCRATCHES> High voltage (The unforgettable sound) High voltage (bringin' you up and takin' you down) High voltage (coming at you from every side) High voltage (makin' the rhythm and rhyme collide) What's real (is the kids who know there's something wrong) What's real (is the kids who think they don't belong) What's real (is the kids who have nowhere to run) (Who are hiding in the shadows, waiting for the sun) <HIGH VOLTAGE BACKING> (Akira) I put a kink in the backbones of clones with microphones Never satisfy my rhyme, Jones Spraying bright day over what you might say My blood type's Krylon, Technicolour, Type A On highways, write with road rage Pages of wind in cages of tin, that bounce all around (Surround sound) devouring the scene Subliminal gangrene paintings, over all the same thing Sing song, karaoke copy bullsh*t Break bones verbally with sticks and stone tactics Fourth dimension, combat convention Write rhymes at ease while the track stands at attention Meant to put you away, with the pencil pistol official Sixteen line, the rhyme missile While you risk your all, I pick out all your flaws Spittin' rah, blah, blah, blah, you can say you saw (Because) (This is dedicated to) <SCRATCHES> High voltage (The unforgettable sound) High voltage (bringin' you up and takin' you down) High voltage (coming at you from every side) High voltage (makin' the rhythm and rhyme collide) What's real (is the kids who know there's something wrong) What's real (is the kids who think they don't belong) What's real (is the kids who have nowhere to run) (Who are hiding in the shadows, waiting for the sun) (Pulling me close, the shadow is warm inside) (This is where I feel at home, this is my place to hide) (Sometimes, sometimes, sometimes) <HIGH VOLTAGE> (Pulling me close, the shadow is warm inside) (This is where I feel at home, this is my place to hide) (Sometimes I feel like a prophet, misunderstood) (Under the gun, like a new disease) (Sometimes I feel like a prophet, misunderstood) (Under the gun, like a new disease) (This is dedicated to) <SCRATCHES> High voltage (The unforgettable sound) High voltage (bringin' you up and takin' you down) High voltage (coming at you from every side) High voltage (makin' the rhythm and rhyme collide) What's real (is the kids who know there's something wrong) What's real (is the kids who think they don't belong) What's real (is the kids who have nowhere to run) (Who are hiding in the shadows, waiting for the sun) High voltage (The unforgettable sound) High voltage (bringin' you up and takin' you down) High voltage (coming at you from every side) High voltage (makin' the rhythm and rhyme collide) What's real (everybody who doesn't feel safe) What's real (everybody who knows they're out of place) What's real (everybody with nowhere to run) (Who hide from the shadows, waiting for the sun) <DEDICATED BACKING AND CODA> High voltage (Sometimes)
Because you wrote it. Learn to handle constructive criticism. I personally don't like it. All you did was take lyrics from 2 songs and put them together. Nothing new, nothing special. I could do the same thing in about 20 seconds.
Because you wrote it. Learn to handle constructive criticism. [/b][/quote] This is coming from someone who attacked another member because they caught Will having lyrics from other songs in his piece. To the topic-starter, sorry, I hated this. You didn't do anything.
This is coming from someone who attacked another member because they caught Will having lyrics from other songs in his piece. [/b][/quote] What the hell. Nate didn't "attack" anyone. He stated how Will did absolutely nothing wrong in his topic. Who cares if Will had similar lyrics in his song? I suggest you re-read what Will posted in his topic and get your damn facts straight before you say anything. You haven't been here long enough to know anything about Will and his history of writing nor any one of us.