End of the World

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    Friskey™

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    End of the World

    Self-destruction is all I need
    Because I feel so lost without you
    It sucks that I'm here
    Don’t you see the scar on my eye?
    I know that you’ll be gone
    Forever

    The end of the world is coming
    And your not here to save me
    You can blow your knee out once
    But you can’t love me twice
    Third time’s the charm?
    Never

    Can you be so insincere?
    Don’t you ever open your mouth again?

    You can take your broken words
    That you don’t see
    I need to break my head in
    You can take your lies
    That you don’t know
    You need to break your head in.
     
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    Vampire

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    It was okay. I love "the end of of the world is coming and you're not here to save me."

    I didn't understand this question though: "Don’t you ever open your mouth again?"

    The line: "It sucks that I'm here" strikes me as odd because suddenly it sounds like really bad dialogue.
     
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    Friskey™

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    The line "Don’t you ever open your mouth again?" is not supposed to be a question...I think I pushed the wrong key when typing this or something

    And BTW, when I wrote this, I was listening to 18 Visions at the time, so thats what it struck me as
     
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    x3r09

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    not bad...

    but to me it seemed a little random, like it had no sense behind it

    but then again, not bad :D
     
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    Friskey™

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    It's supposed to be about my ex!
     

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