This was wrote by the singer of my band, she doesn't know I've posted this.....She just had some random lines, and I fitted it together and wrote the second verse and part of the bridge ----------------------------------------------------- I feel so empty There's nothing left inside me Why do I feel alone? Like no one knows I exist So why do you stand by me? When I told you I loved him Words don't mean a thing to me Your always going to be everything I ever wanted Everything I'll ever need You've had your one last chance But you let go The bloodstains on your sleaves The crystal tears down your cheek You stole me, I'm incomplete Every me, and every you My heart bleeds for you You make the simple things go away The long lonely path to the end Tumbleweeds roll by The same way that you walked away from me I close my eyes, your smile is burnt on my memory You still act like I don't exist So why do you stand by me? When I told you I loved him Words don't mean a thing to me Your always going to be everything I ever wanted Everything I'll ever need You've had your one last chance But you let go The bloodstains on your sleaves The crystal tears down your cheek You stole me, I'm incomplete Every me, and every you I Just want to walk away with you Why? So we can be happy together Said I To the simple things you say to me The bloodstains on your sleaves The crystal tears down your cheek You stole me, I'm incomplete Every me, and every you The bloodstains on your sleaves The crystal tears down your cheek You stole me, I'm incomplete Every me, and every you
I like it alot I acctually love it if you have a sample I would love to hear it on "Kick Back:Cafe We Want To Hear You". Lyrics are amazing.... but it sounds too metaphoric which is cool in my opinion (makes you think) but some people don't like to think and assume you're just putting words that sound cool and smart together. That's when the voice comes in. If the voice has no emotion then there's a problem..you have to feel "empty like there's nothing left inside you" when you sing to make it sound good or real. Wow I sound like a critic What I mean to say is it sounds great so far. Is it an official band or is it just fun?? Either way it's working. Good Luck
Thanks Spiked...and yes it is an officail band...well..kinda...its for fun, but we want to play gigs from it...and maybe get somewhere if we're good enough.
I know I replied but....ummmm..scary I just read it again and I love it even more!!! It's amazing please keep me posted on the progress. It's really really good.