Above The Sky

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    Evi

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    Evi, Oct 17, 2004



    This poem is kind of pointless, I actually don't know myself what it's about. But please comment :)
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    Above The Sky
    I'm staring at the clouds,
    They are staring back at me
    I asked them what I did wrong back then
    The answer is clear,
    The answer is powerful,
    The answer is right,
    It says, Everything,
    You're not worth to live
    You're not worth that I care for you
    Found your way out ,
    Yourself
     
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    dark_angle

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    dark_angle, Oct 24, 2004



    nice, i like it :rolleyes:
     
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    esaul17

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    esaul17, Oct 27, 2004



    Brutal. Short and powerful. Good job.

    7.5/10
     
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    Evi

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    Evi, Oct 27, 2004



    Thank you :)
     

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