My Versions of 'Forgotten' & 'Points Of Authority'

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    Luke

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    Forgotten:

    From the top to the bottom
    (We're lost in our thoughts)
    The laws are forgotten
    (They exist no more)
    The sun has escaped me
    (The stars shine up high)
    You'll never enslave me
    (For as long as I try)

    From the top to the bottom
    (we're lost in our thoughts)
    The laws are forgotten
    (They exist no more)
    The sun has escaped me
    (The stars shine up high)
    You'll never ensave me
    (for as long as I try)

    These times are so dark,You can hardly see
    I walk down a street and consequently
    I'm stopped by the obsticles in the path ahead
    Wishing I could take back everything I said
    The words I sed to you so agressivly
    Reflected off your backstabbing lies to me
    The truth is how I think it should be
    But instead you lied and said you'd remember me

    From the top to the bottom
    (we're lost in our thoughts)
    The laws are forgotten
    (They exist no more)
    The sun has escaped me
    (The stars shine up high)
    You'll never ensave me
    (for as long as I try)

    From the top to the bottom
    (we're lost in our thoughts)
    The laws are forgotten
    (They exist no more)
    The sun has escaped me
    (The stars shine up high)
    You'll never ensave me
    (for as long as I try)

    In the memory you'll find me
    Your lies burnt me up
    The darkness grips us all tightly
    Because the sun has pushed its luck

    Moving all around
    I'm dizzy from the ups and downs
    The pollution of the false truth swifts around
    In a society that depends on greed
    Behind closed doors,It seems that you have planted the seed
    And Then you have the guts to ask
    How my attitude towards you has changed so fast
    You left me alone to fend for myself
    While I watched and laughed at how your kingdom fell
    To the gutter you fell into a systimatic trance
    People through coins but didn't even glance (at ya)
    But Somehow you managed to build yourself back up again
    but then you made the mistake of lying again!

    From the top to the bottom
    (we're lost in our thoughts)
    The laws are forgotten
    (They exist no more)
    The sun has escaped me
    (The stars shine up high)
    You'll never ensave me
    (for as long as I try)

    From the top to the bottom
    (we're lost in our thoughts)
    The laws are forgotten
    (They exist no more)
    The sun has escaped me
    (The stars shine up high)
    You'll never ensave me
    (for as long as I try)

    In the memory you'll find me
    Your lies burnt me up
    The darkness grips us all tightly
    Because the sun has pushed its luck

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    Yeah I got you caught in the act
    You better step back
    Your Telling me that
    But I see right throught you

    In the memory you'll find me
    Your lies burnt me up
    The darkness grips us all tightly
    Because the sun has pushed its luck

    In the memory
    you will find me
    Your lies burnt me up
    The darkness grips us all tightly
    Because the sun has pushed its luck


    Points Of Authority:

    Forfeit the game
    Your in for a fight
    You make me sick get out of my sight
    Forfiet the game
    Cos in the night
    The battle begins,a test of your might

    SHUT UP!!!

    You love the way I talk to you
    The way I say whats on my mind in my agresive voice
    You fake your life,through a facade
    YOUR TEARS,THEY'RE NOTHING TO ME

    You'd Like to think your never wrong
    (I'm sick of your words)
    You have to act like your someone
    (Your never concerned)
    You want someone to hurt like you
    (These points are unheard)
    You wanna share what you've been through
    (YOU LIVE WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED)

    You love the things I say I'll do
    The way I hurt myself again just to get back at you
    You think your lies will get you through
    YOUR TEARS,THEY'RE NOTHING TO ME

    You'd like to think your never wrong
    (I'm sick of your words)
    You have to act like your somone
    (your never concerned)
    You want someone to hurt like you
    (These points are not heard)
    You wanna share what you've been through
    YOU LIVE WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED

    (yo,yo)
    Forfeit the game
    Stop your talk show
    Conduct is what?
    You'll never know
    Forfeit the game
    Cos tommorow
    When this fights done
    You'll reap what you sow

    Forfeit The game
    The battle has start
    I'm in the light while your in the dark
    Forfeit the game
    Cos when you're behind bars
    You'll be the one whos seeing the stars

    You'd Like to think your never wrong
    (Im sick of these words)
    You have to act like your someone
    (You're never concerned)
    You want someone to hurt like you
    (These Points will be heard)
    You wanna share what you've been through
    YOU LIVE WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED

    You'd like to think your never wrong
    (Forfeit the game)
    (you've lived what you've learned)
    You have to act like your someone
    (forfeit the game)
    (You've lived what you've learned)
    You have to act like your someone
    (forfeit the game)
    (you've lived what you've learned)
    You wanna share what you've been through
    YOU'VE LIVED WHAT YOU'VE LEARDED



    Please tell me what you think
     
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    Luke

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    Good covers?
     
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    Adam

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    There's no need to bump your own song just so people notice it and try to give you feedback just because no one replied to it in the first place -_- <_<


    And I don't like it when people change songs into "thir own versions" it just annoys me.

    But this sounds okay 7/10
     
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    Luke

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    well sorry if this upset you
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    i would think some words would give you trouble to make it flow, the 'agressively' stands out to me the most if i think to the original versions and put your words into it, but that is just my point of view,which of course might be a complete rubbish. gotta right to be wroooooooooongggggggggggg! otherwise
    :thumbsup:
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^ ...I guess :huh:
     
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    NofxPants

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    not bad, it's cool.
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    The rhymes are great, but if you sing it to the tune of the songs, they don't flow with it.
     
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    Luke

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    Surprisingly they do.My band played the tabs for it (not execllent but a very good attempt) and I rapped the verses to My version of 'Forgotten' and it blended in perfectly.
     
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    Holiday

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    heheheh very intesting. i like the forgotten one. cool renditions. ^_^
     
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    Mechanical Christ

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    Not bad, not bad...
     
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    Luke

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    Thank you ^_^
     

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