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    Jamie

    Jamie Super Member LPA Super Member

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    This is the longest Ive ever took to write a song...4 days..Hope you all like it, because I do
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    {verse 1}
    I dont know what I did wrong
    Everything I ever said didnt matter anymore
    And now I've ended up all alone
    Nowhere place to go, nowhere to turn
    I should have payed more attention
    Listened to the things I was told
    But then again, nothing really made sense to me
    It's not my fault I ended up this way

    {chorus}
    As I look at you through this stained glass window
    I can see there's a glimmer of hope
    At the end of the tunnel
    I will dig through to find my exit

    {verse 2}
    When I look back at everything
    I dont see why the blame got passed on to me
    I wasnt the only one playing this game
    You try to put all the blame on me
    Now I have no place to go, no place to turn
    Nothing ever seemed right
    Everything seemed to fade away
    Like a forgotton dream
    And now

    {chorus}
    As I look at you through this stained glass window
    I can see there's a glimmer of hope
    At the end of the tunnel
    I will dig through to find my exit

    {bridge}
    Why did you let me
    WALK AWAY
    It shouldnt have come to this
    And I know
    AND I KNOW
    That I'll always be alone like this
    As long I take the blame

    {chorus}
    As I look at you through this stained glass window
    I can see there's a glimmer of hope
    At the end of the tunnel
    I will dig through to find my exit
     
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    Messy Marj

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    I like it :D Good job Jamies.
     
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    Dedicated

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    I really like this one, man!


    The chorus is amazing...





    :eek:





    Keep it up, more? Or something? :lol:
     
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    Jamie

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    Well...to tell you the truth...we've been writing, by 'we' I mean, Jaded Expression, have been writing this song for a while, and finally it has lyrics!
     
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    Dean

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    :eek: It was well worth the four days it took to write.

    If you didn't get that, lets just say it's bloody brilliant.
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks alot man...Appreciate it
     
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    Luke

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    Excellent!
     
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    its soooo gooddd.. great job! i wish i cud write like you! :D
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks alot for the comments..

    @freaklikemeh: its not hard, just write down your feelings. 9 times outta 10 when you read it it may sound all wrong, but when other people read it and they will tell you how good it is. Just learn from expirience basically.
     
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    hollowtubes

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    Sounds like something Staind would write. I like it ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    Staind....hmmm cool I guess..I dont listen to them but what the hey!
     

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