I remember just the other day, When we were lying on your bed, Everything seemed so perfect, Nothing was going to stand in our way, And I remember thinking to myself that night, I dont ever want to see you leave me. There are things I could be better at, My negativity always seems to get the better of me, But now I know, that for you, I will change my ways, The past was great, but you know what, I pray for a better tomorrow. All I want to do is be with you, For now and forever. We said we can work things out I know I can and will do everything To make sure I'm always with you There's nothing really left for me to say right now Except... I Love You!
Bang bang, that's amazing I'm gonna try and memorize it, and use it on my next girlfriend...if I ever have one again...hmm......hehe Very nicely done!
Very sweet, man. btw, some lyrical feedback maybe you could change (to) There are things I could be better at, My negativity always seems to get the best of me,