Sky Came Falling

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    Will

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    "Sky Came Falling"

    On the day that the sky came falling
    Crashing itself down upon my little world
    I clutched my chest as it stung with pain
    The breath was stolen from my lungs
    The stars fell from their perches so high
    As the clouds writhed with so much pain
    That they rained on the world for days
    Their tears crystal clear and full of regret
    Broken glass shards pierce into my heart
    The hurricane of torment slams into me
    Regret sharpens itself upon my livelihood
    The intoxicating beauty slashes at me
    Reprimanding my thoughts as they form
    My deep affection for her floats around
    Meditating around and around my head
    Never wanting to leave so I always see
    She’s the myth that I have to believe in
    Always haunting me remaining inside
    So many missed chances have gone by
    All the opportunities have slipped past
    Even the sun won’t shine upon me now
    Turning away to shine on him instead
    Jealously has taken over me again
    Clutching at me and never letting go
    I’d do anything to have her for myself
    But it’s too late now and it’s too far gone
    Curse the day that the sky came falling
    The day the angel was sent from above
    Only to haunt and torment all of me
    She isn’t real and I can’t make her real
    Her emerald green eyes pull me right in
    Intoxicating beauty tears everything down
    And I lost her before ever even had her
     
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    good poem
     
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    Jamie

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    Very nice, as ever mate!
     
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    Good job Will :thumbsup:
     
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    Will

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    Thanks for the comments. I revised the poem at school today, in study hall. Click here.
     
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    Good stuff. No doubt about that.
     
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    Amazing work! :eek:
     
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    Thanks.
     

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