I missed writing, I haven't written in a while. Please at least check it out lol, I want to know how it sounds and if it's good or not. Tell me if i'm a little shabby with the writing, mmk? ------------ -My Exsistence- Trace the patterns across the sand Devouring the picture as it forms on land My creation my world My soul my exsistence Lies upon the earth as I shadow my persistance My tears are folded in my heart shaped box Away from your eyes inside it locks In the shadows i'll slowly die And then you'll know what it means to cry
I really like it but there are some grammar errors: Exsistence = existence Persistance = persistence other than that, very good.
um.........what did u write? [/b][/quote] Do you purposely act like you don't have a clue about anything or is that the way you are? I know you're a smarter person than this so please don't act like you dont know anything because it's starting to get frustrating.