Infant Mortality (Blitzkrieg) This lifelong brawl between countless nations Were everyone stands alone But the only wat to go is to follow their orders Taking command in the land of the free... You may say its free but to enter it whats the fee? I don't care for everything you worked for I don't care if you say I can have it all There is something that tells me you lied to a nation Just a gut feeling that tells me you tried to end it all Terrorism - A fight for freedom with loss of hope Handing guns to men knowing they can't cope With open fire, they show the goverment is losing control How the media invades our lives and homes So put the trigger to the finger and the gun to the chest Another one to add to the death toll I don't care for everything you worked for I don't care if you say I can have it all There is something that tells me you lied to a nation Just a gut feeling that tells me you tried to end it all The priceless lives you daily take The tax we pay to stay protected In a world were everyman makes mistakes But still perfection is expected I don't care for everything you worked for I don't care if you say I can have it all There is something that tells me you lied to a nation Just a gut feeling that tells me you tried to end it all Terrorism - A fight for freedom with loss of hope Handing guns to men knowing they can't cope With open fire, they show the goverment is losing control How the media invades our lives and homes So put the trigger to the finger and the gun to the chest Another one to add to the death toll
hi, just wanted to say, that poem is great, you have a talent, you should do something with it, you know of o good writers site, where you can self publish? (you can also self publish music there etc), , can pm me if you want link to one i know. i think you should share your poetry with a world!
Thanx for your comment. But I dont think I want anything published until my band has got its act together and we agree on a few things. But when we do that I know were to come lol
Thanx for your comment. But I dont think I want anything published until my band has got its act together and we agree on a few things. But when we do that I know were to come lol [/b][/quote] Sorry but all I can say is good luck,my band has been goin at it for months and it is good music but getting to a record company/publisher is f'ing difficult
Sorry but all I can say is good luck,my band has been goin at it for months and it is good music but getting to a record company/publisher is f'ing difficult [/b][/quote] Its gonna be a while before we even think about sending demos off and stuff like that though because only have a guitarist and a drummer and we've only just learnt how to actually play our instruments but we both play keyboard pretty good. But we havnt got a perminant vocalist yet (I have to fill in untill we find one, and thats gonna be funny.)
good luck with getting it together, as hellflame profecy said getting your stuff out there is not easy to begin with, however good you are, when you get your stuff together, persevere at it, don't let the dissapointment to detter you, keep going till you knock on the door that will open to you. if you dont use all your poetry in your music, i would still encourage you to publish that as a writer you are fantastic. i got my poetry out when i was 18 in my country (czech, i now live in uk) in underground poetry mag, then i got mad and whatever i wrote i burnt or my friend stole it before i could burn it, she used few for lyrics in her band, but she soon gave up her music as she joined the czech model of giving in to eat, work, not have fun and wait for death brigade. i run of to uk to lead my nomadic perpetual madness. i will never give up on my dreams, and i hope you will not either, this world needs dreamers and people seeking out something more then robotic lifestyle.