Another one of my crappy poems. I really need some ratings on this one please guys. I'm trying to get some lyrics down to use in my band and i got a sudden burst of inspiration the other night and these are the best i came up with. No name either so if anyone could come up with a name that would be VERY helpful I pushed you to your limit and here is my apology I should have noticed what I was doing sooner It was me that destroyed us I drove myself insane over blaming you When it was really me who needed to be blamed I held on to you so tight every day Hoping that you would come back It hurt so see you happy all that time While I wallowed in my misery Over the biggest loss of my life I'm like a shattered piece of glass The pieces are hard to find I'm scattered everywhere Never to be found again Picking up the pieces of my life after you tore me apart has not been easy You threw me over to one side without a care for me at all I know I was hard to deal with but why couldn't you cope? I find myself hard to deal with day in day out I have thought of ending this petty existence of mine many a time But stop myself for my own sake and yours You may have intended to hurt me like you did You may have not but either way it happened I'm glad to see you healing me but the wounds are still there Visible or not, the scars still run deep inside my body I’m like a shattered piece of glass The pieces are hard to find I’m scattered everywhere Never to be found again Shattered into a million pieces and still trying to find them I hope you will accept this apology for my stupid actions And we can move on with our lives... Bad and good feedback are very welcome