To One I Love

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    [Brkng Th H@bt]

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    sometimes i wish i could learn the reasons why
    life is so f******* horrible, why i have to lie
    left with the fact that i've made too many mistakes
    i've lost my take on life, i wish i was never awake
    i lay in my bed, wrists cut, with eyes shut
    lost inside my thoughts, everything is so f*****
    never to see, the lights of living again
    never to find out when, i'll be able to talk to my friends
    i keep it inside, letting all the thoughts collide
    linking to others, to a conclusion, wishing i could die
    i've tried looking up, my head is always pushed down
    these thoughts are too heavy, leaving me with miserable frowns
    i see my parents, i see my friends, i see my siblings
    living the nice life, doin' their thing
    trying to make me a part of everything, i exclude myself
    i keep inside, that i never feel so well
    i wanna go into the room, and lock it tight
    sit in my bed, and watch the blade of knife
    flashing into my eyes, tip and bottom touching my wrists
    eyes shut, trying to uncurl my fists
    h*** has come to take me, burn me, and hurt me
    it's like god is there, but has forgotten to help me
    living in a country with so many rights
    the right to remain silent, what about the right to fight?
    to fight for yourself, back off all opponents
    to make you feel bad, give you drugs, they wanna make you own it
    it's like a disease, carried on by those who can't see
    the light theirselves, and tryin to run and flee
    from their mistakes, the horrible turns they made
    reminds you of everything, you took, thought you should take
    they were wrong, you knew better, but you couldn't resist
    like i can't persist the fact that suicide could end up being on my to-do list

    i wish i could sieze a good moment, squeeze it and hold it
    feel its feeling every second, and know that I'll always be the one to know it
    i know i never will, you wish it too
    you never thought you could never make it, you can too
    you resist the fact that things can turn around
    things can be looking up, and instead of facing the ground
    you can look at your friends again, always remember when
    to go to those parties you used to go to back then
    i never thought i could, but it turns out i can
    i resist to do it, just like you do too, and man
    it's a mistake, we're too foolish to do it
    we're too obsessed with one thing, it's f***** up s***
    look in the mirror, compare your pictures from then to now
    you look so different, you've turned around
    you're completely the opposite, and so am i
    i'm not gonna sit around here, and keep tellin' lies

    i've seen it all i tell you, but no one believes me
    they think i'm just trying to get all the attention so quickly
    deceit is the number one way to go down
    to make you frown, and make your life turn around
    i see my posters, of my favorite bands on my walls
    they my idols, i know all of they're songs
    they relate to me, talk to me, make feel better
    which is why so many people can be brought together
    it just kills me to think that you think life is so horrible,
    you're adorable, everyday i would look at you if you passed through the corridors
    you're making a mistake to believe that life
    isn't worth living no more, you're not even strivin'
    to try, doesn't that make sense to you?
    sittin alone, what is that gonna do for you?
    attract a friend's attention? to get them to know you a little better?
    to show everyone that with anyone you've never been together?
    you tryin' to show that life is worth nothing
    and sitting on the bench still won't bring you something?
    F*** it, I know how it feels, i've been through it before
    I'm still with it now, but it's getting better, it's much more
    better than it was before, it would be for you
    if you gave it try, to look at the cool things you do
    ignore knives, ignore handguns, ignore those people
    who try to p*** you off, f*** it all, no one's better than you

    you're my idol, i look up to you
    2 years older, I love the things you do
    it makes sense to believe that life is bad,
    it makes sense to feel what makes you mad
    our parents told us to ignore the people
    who make us mad, in fact it's those people who're sad
    they bring us into the group, they make us think we're so horrid
    so sad, so mad, and maybe so boring
    so everyone ignores us, and laughs at us as we walk
    through the hallways of the school, while we sit and talk
    it makes no sense, to believe that they are right
    of course they're not, you know they don't know s*** about the bad life
    they think it too, they believe that they're a mistake
    they hide it inside, it's too much for them to take
    this song is for you and all the people who think,
    that everyone hates them, that everything is nothing
    that they're the only one, who think life is a mistake
    and now, it's one thing i can't take
    please feel better, i really want the old you back
    the way you talked then is now what we both lack
    the smiles, the laughs, the lol's on the IM
    are things i miss, they were who i am
    but now they're not, they're gone, it's too hard to live on
    the fact that you aren't the same now, the real you is gone

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    i wrote this for someone i love who was starting to hate life. any opinions?
     
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    Tony

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    Wrong forum man, but on another note it's pretty good I think...
     
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    that's awesome...keep up the good work ^_^
     
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    [Brkng Th H@bt]

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    D'oh! I'm so absent minded, I just noticed that I posted in the wrong forum. *Hits head*

    Hey moderators, sorry about the mishap. I guess I clicked on the wrong forum. If you can move this, that would be great!

    Sorry, once again! ^_^
     
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    Wrong forum :eek:
     
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    There was no need to quote the whole thing :mellow:
     
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    Andrea

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    /me moves. ^_^
     
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    forgotten girl

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    simply amezing.. really a good one ;)
     

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