cry, an introduction

this is the first set of lyrics from an album of lyrics that i'm writing...

i – cry, an introduction

the sky is upset
you can feel its sorrow
as it sheds its tears
and covers the world
it will never forget
what will transpire tomorrow
so it blankets our fears
with its eyelashes curled

 

Short...simple....sweet

Good job man

 

Now, that is sweet

 

Do I see a double post... Mark, lol

Will, those are some tight lyrics

 

that's sweet indeed

 

Very descriptive! I like it. I can't wait to read more.

 

Thanks for the comments.

 

Simply awesome

 

Beautiful.

Those two are my favorite lines.

Good stuff, babes. :hugz:

 

My favourite from you so far