"What the Willow Sees"

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    sickcycle

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    “What the Willow Sees”

    Down By the steady waters of the “Old Willows Inn”
    There lies a mystery from a painful night
    Water washes and mixes with the blood of a shameful woman
    And not one witness was there to behold the sight

    The autumn leaves tumble in the wind and bring upon a new day
    Nature covers the bitter steps once taken in distress
    An echoing of screams hushed by years of rain washes away
    As the will of a higher power looks down and decides what is best

    On the rickety old docks is where it all happened
    Where the jealous and devious came to know one another
    Where a crime of passion was wrongfully committed
    But scarcely does any one remember, all these years later

    Save one soul, a mere shadow of a man; that now looks down at the lake
    Weathered from years of searching and tired by his travel
    Searching for the end to a mystery, searching for his old companions sake
    A mystery that can only be told through the eyes of the old willow

    For throughout these years she has seen the changing of summer to winter
    She sees the death of the old, and the mystery she hides within
    This is why she weeps, for the death of this mans heart, and nature concurs
    She sees so much throughout the ages, and remembers this poor girls hand

    The weeping willow cannot express in the spoken languages known
    Only through her depressed branches that sway in the wind
    A language that is only spoken by those who are doomed to be alone
    So as she would try to intervene, she cannot express what she intends

    This man shall never have his resolution, just an unsolvable crime
    The tears he feels now will soon pass, soon fade with age
    But she will still remain, branches swaying, for the rest of time
     
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    Madi

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    That's beautiful, good job!
     
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    sickcycle

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    Thank You
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Wow, that's beautiful. Great descriptions, beautiful.
     

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