Above Medulla

hey guys, I haven't posted my work on LPA for ages... haven't made anything complete for about 7 months anyway.

The title comes from the Bridge in the song. I always like doing a little research when I'm writing lyrics and such.
Cerebellum - a major division of the vertebrate brain;
situated above the medulla oblongata and beneath the cerebrum in humans.

LOL, I know you don't have to tell me about my clever song-title techniques. (I also went for my own little song structure on this one.)Anyhow, here it is...

"Above Medulla"
By John.

a. introduction
- bounce!! [edit] (just wanted to let you know "bounce!!" really isn't part of the song )

b. verse
- trust, is a bond ment to be broken.
- love, is just alive in the hopeless.
- i've lied enough, i'm done with the cheating.
- you've cried so much it's made me speechless.

c. chorus
- she means everything.
- without her i'm nothing.
- gimme my chance, i swear i'll take it.
- but keep your heart, i'm afraid i'll break it.

d. post-chorus
- you can go on alone, leave me here.
- take a photograph home, i'll soon disappear.

e. verse ii
- i'd do anything to mend your heart.
- pretend the romance isn't far and gone.
- but this emotion keeps spreading us apart.
- bullet to the cerebellum, i'm dead, so long.

f. bridge
- bullet... to the cerebellum -- (better dead, goodbye).
- bullet to the cerebellum (better dead, goodbye).
- bullet to the cerebellum (better dead, GOODBYE)!!
- bullet to the cerebellum (better dead, F##K YOU)!!!

g. chorus ii
- she meant something.
- without her i was nothing.
- play the hero, or watch me. (...)
- as i fall back down to zero.

 

Thanks a bunch man! Yes you are, it also controls your heart's functioning.

 

Really cool man. your writings never dissapoint!

 

Thanks, bro.

 

That's a really wicked song. 9/10! I wish it was longer, though. :'(

 

^^True.

 

Holy crap! That was amazing!

 

Thank you, Andrea.

 

That's fvcking awesome.

 

that was awesome man

 

Thank you once again for the comments.

 

John, i havnt heard or seen any work from you since latter stages of last year, but this is a several leaps of improvement, the lyrics are all-round better, and you pick the best ways to get the songs meaning out, well done

 

Thanks, I really haven't written at all this year. You should start talking to me on MSN again. lol

 

that is really awesome... there aren't words to describe it... ok well other that awesome

 

Thank You.

 

that..is genius. Wow. Creativeness is incredible, great job.

 

I was gonna stop replying to this thread, but I still have to thank you 'cuz that wouldn't be right.