Dreaming Into Reality

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    Will

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    Dreaming Into Reality

    Last night, I had a dream about you.
    I saw you standing on the other side of a room,
    And, as I made my way to where you were,
    You gave me a look that ripped me in two.
    I felt my wrists slash themselves
    As your glare pierced into my chest.
    The stabbing pain throbbed throughout my body
    And I couldn’t catch my breath.
    The blood poured out and I cried red
    All because you couldn’t keep a promise.
    Now, I’m forced to face the fact that you’re gone
    Just because you felt jaded.
    The scars of the cuts on my wrists
    Remind me of all the dysfunction and tension
    Between our hearts and our minds.
    The infection spread throughout me
    Until I couldn’t breathe anymore.
    It was then that I realized it was all a dream,
    But I awoke to find that the day’s events
    Would transpire just like they did in my sleep.
     
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    Cassie

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    :mellow: Wow.

    That's an amazing piece of work Will Will. GJ... grape jelly, heh, I mean good job! :hugz:
     
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    Messy Marj

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    That is amazing Will!
    You're a good writer ;)
     
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    Will

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    Thanks for the comments. :)
     
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    that is sooooo awesome
     
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    Thats really good. ^_^
     
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    :eek: whooo!!!...that was amazing, you really are good! :D It really ments something...maybe you could do something with this...
     
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    erasethepain

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    That is good. I can always relate to your songs because your like my twin.

    I should hate you because now I have a lazy eye. The fifth line caught my attention so much that one of my eyes were stuck on it while the other read the rest.
     
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    Will

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    Thanks for the comments.
     

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