Short lyrics that I wrote with a friend

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    Darcy

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    My friend wrote...

    "The whore of our nation
    Defines infinite duration
    Our youths at a station
    Deserve truth or explanation"

    And I expanded from there. Tell me what you think...


    (starts out quiet...soft singing)
    Blurry is not so satisfying
    Not wary of self control and drying out
    Is it a lack of interest
    Or something deeper than this?

    (sudden loudness, almost screaming, distortion on vocals)
    The whore of our nation
    Defines infinite duration
    Our youths at a station
    Deserve truth or explanation

    (back to quietness)
    Feeling is just so terrifying
    Heartless, we ravage, we give up trying
    Beauty is in the eye
    Of everyone who's gone outside

    (loud again)
    Fretful concentration
    To pry apart conservation
    Full-on violation
    Provide essential deprivation

    The whore of our nation
    Defines infinite duration
    Our youths at a station
    Deserve truth or explanation
     
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    RememberingNever

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    I liked it. :thumbsup:

    "The whore of our nation
    Defines infinite duration
    Our youths at a station
    Deserve truth or explanation"


    I liked the rhyming.
     

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