Yeah I don't know...does anyone find this disturbing at all? Just...tell me what you think in general. I don't know if this one is good or not. ------- Attic asylum and the comfort of being all alone Pierce me please I want to be thrown outside and far from home Holes in your eyes show me you don't know it's been done before Thought is the deepest nail shot through to close the door But bullets fired are words from mouthes I never want to leave you out You're the other half of the crossfire Where guns are tongues and lives are shot down Suddenly silent is the revolution, step down our stand For someone who doesn't give a fu*k you really seem to care Letters are soldiers, priceless, sh*t faced, anger hungry battle whores Pulse is free like dropping bombs out of my scars Free air is a point of fear Where all we breathe is hate in here We are the guns who lost our trust We are the ones, reduced to rust But vikadin is a good exuse When life's all you've got left to lose My halo wants to be torn out Go fu*k yourself and your fu*ked up self help
No, it's not disturbing. Infact, I really liked it. I didn't quite understand it at first but I've read it again and get it now. I really liked the poem.. it was really good. My favorite part is: Free air is a point of fear Where all we breathe is hate in here We are the guns who lost our trust We are the ones, reduced to rust