Bullet Breaking

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    Jamie

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    It's not the silence or recognition
    It's just a reason to be bold
    Another feeling to be messed with
    Just one more person to behold
    Have you covered up the truth?
    With your web of wicked lies

    Going faster than a bullet
    Moving like an open heartbreak
    Just a slight twist of fate
    Will tempt you to break

    Just to turn your empty pages
    And begin another chapter
    Of your life as it ends silently
    Spilling from the pages
    The thousands of distant lies
    Slowly fading and

    Going faster than a bullet
    Moving like an open heartbreak
    Just a slight twist of fate
    Will tempt you to break

    One last time
    For us to be closer
    Closer than ever
    Before I go
    I want you to say
    You love me

    Going faster than a bullet
    Moving like an open heartbreak
    Just a slight twist of fate
    Will tempt you to break
     
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    Messy Marj

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    :thumbsup: goooood!
     
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    Madi

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    Wow! Brilliant! *both thumbs up*
     
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    linkinparkbby101

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    awesome dude! :D
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Wow that's good. That'd make an awesome song :D
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks
     
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    Aplace_4_MyHead

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    Awesome. wow my comment is os original. not.
    :) but great work
     
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    Darcy

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    Bullet is a good word to describe a lot of things. I enjoyed reading your work, keep it up! You're great!
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks people
     
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    don't do this

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    totally love it :)
     
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    RememberingNever

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    I enjoyed reading your poem. Great work.. keep it up. :thumbsup:
     

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