Scream Your Name

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    Jamie

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    With every breath you take
    Holds me closer to your heart
    And the silence is screaming words at me
    Every move's misleading
    As it comes to an end

    There's fifty thousand ways I could
    Scream your name
    Louder than anything you have heard
    And it cuts through your skin as it
    Seeps through your mind

    After all this time
    We still can't seem to get it right
    The silence is getting louder
    Since you can't control your words
    All your moves are misleading
    As it comes to an end

    There's fifty thousand ways I could
    Scream your name
    Louder than anything you have heard
    And it cuts through your skin as it
    Seeps through your mind

    (whispers) Am I just a dream?
     
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    Stina

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    Wow..that's amazing. You did a really good job on that. It's really touching. *sigh* I wish i could write like that :(
     
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    Jamie

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    Umm..thanks Stina
     
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    Simply excellent! :)
     
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    don't do this

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    some guys have all the LUCK!!
    u got some serious skill here man....itz totally WOW :peace:
     
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    Ppr:Kut

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    luck.. ? :huh:
     
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    Jamie

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    Yea...luck..I need alot of it..Im totally crap at this
     
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    Ppr:Kut

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    luck? you need luck? thats a lie... youre the luckiest person I've ever seen.. also youre really good at this..
     
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    i agree with u everyone here has awesome talent in everything except for me *sigh* o well :(
     
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    ~*Numb*~

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    yes everyone has some sort of talent, and then there is me....

    the poem is really good, .broken fist. its very touching
     
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    don't do this

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    that's why i said ...LUCK
    this sorta stuff can't come to all of us.n it skipped me especially OH SO BAD :(
     
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    *figure.09*

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    write us sumthin, i wanna c just HOW bad u r! jk, i wanna c wut u got!!!
     
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    Jamie

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    Yeah, Kenji..show us your writing chops..
     
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    don't do this

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    here goes nothing guys :wth:

    it's so full of sometimes that it's kinda draggy but other than that....pretty ok

    Sometimes

    Sometimes the whole world bows before you
    Sometimes every lie is a truth
    Sometimes victory comes before defeat
    Sometimes the world bows at your feet

    Sometimes life waits for death
    Sometime thorns are woven into a wreath
    Sometimes light darkens the day
    Sometimes every colour seems grey

    To put it all together
    Changes come forever
    But life will be just the same
    And end without leaving a stain......
    End like every other game....

    though i like Revenge better.... :blush:
     
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    Jamie

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    Its good..could you please make a seperate topic for it though..as this is my thread :)
     

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