I haven't written in a long time so it may be a little shabby. Please comment though. I'd enjoy some input so I know if it's good or bad or not. Thanks. --------- -Can't Hold On- so much to say but not a thousand words can tell you how I feel I know you say you understand me but these wounds they stay unhealed can you drift away the pain this silent emptiness inside it's racking in my mind to find the words I left behind I can't hold on any longer I can't hold on any longer I need you there to make me stronger I can't breathe when your near me this pain could almost kill me this undeniable hunger.. for you can't look back when I do I see my own two eyes they're staring back at me can't decide who to trust but the end is allways the beginning I can't hold on any longer I can't hold on any longer I need you there to make me stronger I can't breathe when your near me this pain could almost kill me this undeniable hunger.. for you
"Kind of shabby" hardly. It's more like one of the greatest things you've written. The choruses werent as strong as the rest of the song so therefore I'll give it a 9/10 because everything is still great and you can feel the emotion hardcore.
Thankyou. Yeah I know I suck at choruses really badly lol. If had some insperation next time maybe it'll turn out better hopefully.
It's about alot of things. Some of it's about Elijah I suppose but it's really about things from a long time ago. I can't remember much of what it was about unless I go through it word for word.
that is really awsome deffinately a 9/10 you can really put emotions into words... *hope that made sense*