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    Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Cassie, Jun 29, 2004



    Black

    These little black nails,
    They've been through hell.
    Was it my life or your's?
    I never could tell.

    And all the while you're watching me,
    From the outside of this cage.

    But I'd hate to think I'd leave you,
    Without your face between my palms.
    Hold me up in your arms,
    And I'll never wanna come down.

    I'm sorry I f*cked up this time,
    The blood will settle.
    My skin so white,
    These words like ice.

    It's all so final,
    The death of us.
    As for my little black heart,
    I never could tell.

    Comments would be much appreciated, thankies. :)
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    Hybrid Soldier, Jun 29, 2004



    It's really good. :)
     
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    Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Cassie, Jun 29, 2004



    You think so? :mellow: I was a little unsure, but thank you. :blush: ... *puppy* lol.
     
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    ~*Numb*~

    ~*Numb*~ Well-Known Member

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    ~*Numb*~, Jul 6, 2004



    yea i like it! its very true sounding... :mellow:
     
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    Omar A

    Omar A Beyond Science LPA Super Member

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    Omar A, Jul 6, 2004



    Very Awesome Cassie

    Great verse!
     
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    don't do this

    don't do this Well-Known Member

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    don't do this, Jul 6, 2004



    :thumbsup:
     

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