This is my first writing anything, I'd like some comments and I know that alot needs work. I'm not really sure what it is.. Poem, Lyrics, whatever. Thanks. P.S. I know it's very 'rhymey'. Does that effect it? _-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_ I Don't Want to Stay \ I break a part of my heart every day \ To try and find a way \ To say that I dont want to be here, \ I don't want to stay \ With all of this tension \ And all this apprehension \ I'm just waiting to die, \ Can't you see in my eyes? \ Can you see in my soul? \ I'm in this hole \ Without parole. \ I don't want to stay, with all of this pain, \ No, I don't want to stay. \ I need to go, go away \ The skies here are grey \ I'll make my way from here, \ because I cannot stay, \ No, I just simply cannot stay. \ I don't want to stay!