My Rap Song

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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    yea, back for the first time
    tryin' to make this rhyme
    one of the greaters rhymes
    introducing some pride
    not to make you cry
    not to make you blind
    but to realize that u've been livin' a lie
    release your inner side and be alive
    we all know that we hate spy
    it doesn't matter, we just gotta try
    Im here to make you realize
    be happy and dont wave good bye

    yo, i'm no nas
    no, i'm no ja'
    you gotta take it all back

    let's keep up the game
    all the same,
    assumed the name
    when you are trying to copy somebody else
    they're gonna be in flame
    just like you being ashame in 15 minutes of fame
    these rhymes were inspired by Linkin Park
    just like being in the dark with a big question mark
    who's the one that's gonna make the big scratch?

    Yea, we got O to the L B I N
    dat's the name
    just do it again & again
    dont try to be afraid
    'coz then you are gonna be all ashamed
    u gotta loose yourself man
    then no respect is gained

    you people so phony
    I think y'all too corny
    gotta hit it big to make some money
    gotta be independet like da bunny



    so wat do u guys think? most of the song was inspired by mike's rapping. :mike:
     
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    hmmm...its okay. the beginning was awesome but i seemed to lose the beat after. good work though. :)
     
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    how were they inspired by Mike???

    He's never used crap like "Yea, we got O to the L B I N"

    and he's never used made up words like:
    "yo, i'm no nas
    no, i'm no ja'"

    you should change it to inspired by puff daddy or something. Saying that LP inspired you is an insult to them
     
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    the first part was good, but "Got to be independent like da bunny" yeah, ok then
     
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    lmao, we have our own version of Simon Cowell on the LPA forums. :p.
     
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    lmao, we have our own version of Simon Cowell on the LPA forums. :p. [/b][/quote]
    who's he?
     
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    who's he? [/b][/quote]
    He's the American Idol judge guy.
     
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    oh yaaa hah :lol:
     
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    didnt know that. I watch better things, such as south park and the simpsons :D
     
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    simpsons is good. the finale on sunday is going to be cool.
     
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    i got inspired by mike 'cuz i lov the way he raps in the songs. so I decided to make a rap song and from listening too many raps i did the whole song. i also was inspired by other rap artist. but mostly mike :D by the way, OLBIN is my real name. so u guys think that the first and third verse are great?
     
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    the first verce is, good job on that one!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Bryan

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    I think it makes no sence at all.

    Your song should at least have a meaning, I think you just threw a bunch of words together that happen to rhyme. Use your mind a little more ;)

    Also, please dont tell me your serious about those lyrics being inspired by Mike Shinoda. If they are, you need to listen to his lyrics a little better.
     
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    He didn't make up the nas and ja things, there rappers.. ;)
     
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    wow really cool
    do you have music to rap it to??
     
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    wow really cool
    do you have music to rap it to??
    maybe you can put it on the net sometime then i'd love to hear then
     
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    WOW...kid that rap was terrible...inspired by Mike...Maybe inspired by Mike back when he sucked in xero and he was goign threw puberty..damn that was terrible...but good job for the effort man..at least you have some time to throw a bunch of words together...other than that give up the rap thing..country music is always a good chance, just pick up an acoustic guitar......then talk about ice cream n ferris wheels..should work..have fun
     
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    No, it sucks. It's terrible. You insult Mike by saying he inspired you. Even his work in Xero wasn't that bad (but it wasn't bad - it was good).

    At least you didn't rap about 20 inch rims, hoes, or weed.
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    nah, I would like to recorded some way....


    ppl, it's my first rap. it's not dat i am a pro at it. and it does have a meaning. read it carefully. B)
     
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    YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     

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