Fade Away

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    Jamie

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    Paper matches and broken trusts
    Set in stone, like that smile upon your face
    Nothing seems to end with a kiss, just a heart full of
    Quiet dreams and ink stained picture frames
    Another twinkle from your eye, another light to guide
    The way, and a second glance at your, smile that never fades

    And the trust I had in you, I may never see again
    Now that I've let you down, and your fading
    Away, into the rays of light

    On starry nights, I used to look at you and think
    To myself, "What have I done this for?"
    How can I change my ways, to get you to stay
    Nothing seems to end like this, everything sealed with
    Your kiss, and a second glance at that smile that never fades

    And the trust I had in you, I may never see again
    Now that I've let you down, and your fading
    Away, into the rays of light

    Why are we, sitll runnning?
     
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    Messy Marj

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    And Jamie scored again!!! ^_^
    Man, you're great, keep going
    I like the style :)
     
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    Trish

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    Well, it seems that I feel sort of 'connections' with pieces that I relate to, though I don't realte to this, I still think it's amazing and connected to it! Well Done!!
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks..
     
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    Adam

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    nice work ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks man
     
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    Evi

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    you're an amazing writer .... i like all your writings
     
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    Jamie

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    Many thanks fieke
     
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    ..... :mellow:
     
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    its great jamie. i love it ^_^ im saving it as a word document. dont worry ill say its by you. but its really good.
     
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    Andrea

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    I like this one. Excellent job! :)
     

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