Last time I wrote a song was febuary. But I have now written 5 over the past week or 2. So here they are in my mini album. NOTE: I put some info about the songs underneath the song title <div align=center>Brown is the colour of fire</div> This is my favourite song out of all the songs I have written over the past year of me writting <div align=center> Are you under their command Or did they take your hand I sit here depressed with a gun against my head Is it still ok to laugh at me I arise through suicide to take you away But no one knows and you don’t care Only you can stop the pain The truth could take it all away Until I discovered… I had nothing more to live for You told me you knew my future Well, you’re full of sh*t Because the time has come and this ain’t it Because all my thoughts are beating me down No stops my fall when my face cracks on the ground I might as well die because there’s nothing more to come I’ve been told there’s nothing more (to come) I’ve been told there’s nothing more (to come) I’ve been told there’s nothing more (to come) NOTHING MORE My life is just death in making My sanity is just remains of sh*t your faking No one knows how much I have to lose Not even I do Why do you torture me You just say that I am bringing you down I’m your burning disease I’m a deformed hybrid begging on my knees JUST BEGGING FOR MY LIFE BACK This all belongs to me It’s the only f*cking thing I have Just leave me and my obsessions As I gamble my life With loaded dice The dealer is my creator And I bet against my enemy My life is just death in making My sanity is just remains of sh*t your faking No one knows how much I have to lose Not even I do I think back on the past Loving the memories we never had I can only walk alone No one else can stop me I will only die alone Even though no one on earth can kill me My life is just death in making My sanity is just remains of sh*t your faking No one knows how much I have to lose Not even I do The past we never had Alone and no one And die with no one So I can justify all those lies THE GAVEL SLAMS GUILTY As long as I love You are dieing in me Since you called me your disease [x3] Obey the master</div> This was the second song I ever wrote, but completely re-edited it last week <div align=center> Why do you take this from me? I treat you like you don’t belong I make you feel like sh*t I f*ck you up So all you have left… Is a piece of insanity you can’t deal with Follow your orders and you might get respect Tell me what to do and you might get a split head Because you see… I am the master Slave… OBEY THE MASTER Why do you take this from me? I treat you like you don’t belong I make you feel like sh*t I f*ck you up So all you have left… Is a piece of insanity you can’t deal with Don’t do other peoples chores They only make you do more You seem so blind A mist covers you overlooked eyes As you think you fit in Because you see… I am the master Slave… OBEY THE MASTER Why do you take this from me? I treat you like you don’t belong I make you feel like sh*t I f*ck you up So all you have left… Is a piece of insanity you can’t deal with BREAK THE CHAIN Release you from the shackles At least you got pride And at least your ok inside Because you see… YOU ARE THE MASTER Unreal: Part 2</div> I wrote a song called Unreal a while back and just recently thought of some more lyrics for the song but because I wanted to keep the original version the same, I created a second part to the song, keeping the chorus and some of the lines from the original <div align=center> Imagine a world without apologies Like glass it would shatter Best friends into hatred and memory Imagine a life that could only feel guilt and misery Unreal giving time to heal I’m fighting the lies for a second time Since the healings over And I don’t care for how you feel Unreal fantasies plague my mind Nothings the same ‘Cos its all a game in pain Logic is all you need to know I ain’t lying I would never try to hit you No matter the pressure Even if I was down I’d rather beat myself Because that’s all I ever do Nothings the same ‘Cos its all a game in pain I don’t care for consequences If you wanna do what you want If it makes you happy If you think it can save me The just break the rules Because they can’t lock you up Because it’s your life, just live and let die Unreal giving time to heal I’m fighting the lies for a second time Since the healings over And I don’t care for how you feel Unreal fantasies plague my mind They don’t need to cheat Because they already won You don’t need to try There’s no need to run [X2] IMORTALLITY IT’S ALL I GOT LEFT IN ME Leach</div> This song is about the same thing as "obey the master" it's just a song about you suck up to your peers and do what they say because you want them to respect you, when they really don't give a #### <div align=center> Watch the gutter…watch the gutter… Watch it as the blood pours down Your tears fall and hit the ground I’m on your back even if you burn in hell I’ll be there because there’s nothing here to live for Insanity and hate My hope was never here before I’M YOUR LEACH WITHOUT DOUBT OR FEAR IN ME NO LONGER IN DEBT TO POSSIBILITY YOUR WORDS ONLY TORTURE MY MIND NO ONES THERE- TURN YOUR BACK NO ONES THERE THIS TIME JUST TURN YOUR BACK AWAY FROM ME JUST GIVE ME ROOM TO BREATHE I can be your leach, I can be your pretty boy I can be your leach, I can be your little toy YOU TRADE ME IN WHEN I GET OLD YOU FIX ME WHEN YOU’VE BEEN TOLD IM TURNING INTO…YOU INTO A LEACH I’m on your back again Taking you home I’m by your side again Why can’t we be alone, for just a second? You never know… WHEN YOU NEED TO… Watch the gutter…Watch the gutter… YOU NEVER KNOW WHAT LIVES IN MY MIND IS THIS THE RIGHT TIME, TO FIGHT IT YOU NEVER KNOW WHEN TO BLOOD’LL COME DOWN YOUR RIDE WILL ONE DAY HIT THE GROUND I can be your leach, I can be your pretty boy I can be your leach, I can be your little toy One more time I need to know How much you care and… One more time I need to see- YOU RIGHT HERE NEXT TO ME… LEACH I’M ON YOUR BACK I AM YOU… I’M ON YOUR BACK I AM YOUR… LEACH Taking control (out of credit)</div> I wrote this last night. It's just descibing how I've felt over the past few days <div align=center> Under this full moon Is it too soon to make a move? Since you said… It’s a crime to care and not be loved back It’s childish to want what you cannot have Why can’t I come clean for you? It’ll only kill me if you say no So it makes me too scared to ask But if I go on without any answers… I wouldn’t know if I should Walk out and leave it all behind Hope the emotional scars recover in time There is too much here to handle But not all of it is real People put you through sh*t to see how you react They wanna know how you feel They don’t wanna see you in a mask Even though you want our memories in the past Now I got some feelings off my chest Were should we go next…that’s up to you ‘Cos its like I live inside a games console Your hand is on the joystick taking control If you mess up you’ll be out credit WHY DID I LET YOU PLAY ME? Under this full moon Is it too soon to make a move? Because at least I have you As a friend, but at least you don’t hate me Since others let me down you caught me Its only you who can save me There is too much here to handle But not all of it is real People put you through sh*t to see how you react They wanna know how you feel They don’t wanna see you in a mask Even though you want our memories in the past Now I got some feelings off my chest Were should we go next…that’s up to you ‘Cos its like I live inside a games console Your hand is on the joystick taking control If you mess up you’ll be out credit WHY DID I LET YOU PLAY ME? If I force feed my hunger anymore I will snap and bring myself down I need to kill the addiction Show I can lay off the sh*t for just one day ‘Cos I’m addicted to you And its been tormenting me for too f*cking long You say were friends and I don’t care WELL YOU’RE TOO F*CKING WRONG There is too much here to handle But not all of it is real People put you through sh*t to see how you react They wanna know how you feel They don’t wanna see you in a mask Even though you want our memories in the past Please don’t let me down Don’t leave the joystick Once you die you pass me round because you’re out of lives Now I got some feelings off my chest Were should we go next…that’s up to you ‘Cos its like I live inside a games console Your hand is on the joystick taking control If you mess up you’ll be out credit Why did I let you play me? Now I got some feelings off my chest Were should we go next…that’s up to you ‘Cos its like I live inside a games console Your hand is on the joystick taking control If you mess up you’ll be out credit WHY DID I LET YOU PLAY ME? I wanna kill you Just so I can have peace My life is nothing more than broke No need to fix me Please don’t let me down Don’t leave the joystick Once you die you pass me round because you’re out of lives No need to fix me [X4] </div>
Brown is the color of fire and Unreal Part 2 are my favorites! Those are very good; in fact all the stuff posted here has something to offer. I like the metaphor of the joystick game, being played, thought that was very creative.
sure thing, but i forgot to give you ratings, sorry, well out of the two songs i thought rocked my sox, i give the Fire one a 8/10, and the Unreal one a 8.3/10!