This is my first attempt at songwriting. Read, enjoy, review please. Lying side by side, sprawled on the floor I told you "I love you", yet you wanted more Your lips on my neck, your hands on my skin You're blind to the paradox we now live in CHORUS Stop what you're doing It's going too far I'm losing the dream and my wish from the start Stop what you're doing Don't touch me again You can't have my body till you've accepted my heart Hair tangled in fingers, eyes closed in the dark All this arisen from one innocent spark You kissed my lips and caught on fire I've been burned and tormented by this desire chorus You can't have half And not have the whole You want my body I want your soul (repeat to end)
hmmmmmm.........well is this song/poem about a personal experience, or no? if so u should make a title yourself-sry, and if not........message me b/c i have to think about it.! :rawk: