Chidren of America

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    Chris Luke

    Chris Luke LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Children are like Puppets
    Under your wires
    You tell them what you want
    they preform
    But this child hated
    Hated yourcontroled
    The kid of Problems
    Child Abuse
    School
    Steryotypes
    The Bully
    Daddy didn't give a F***
    Mommy semed she didn't care
    Aunty hated him
    Uncle wanted to die
    Surely you rember F***king with the boy
    Nobody cared
    But then you snapped him like a ruler
    Bought a gun at A Shop
    It semmed that Daddy Didn't give a F***
    Mommy didn't even care
    Aunty hated him
    Uncle wanted to die
    Put the gun to his mouth with 1 word he
    said Hate
    Pulled the trigger every one
    remberd him then
    But no one cared about the
    Harmless little puppet
    Not left to entreain any more

    (inspired by my childhood and jeremy)
     
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    Leones

    Leones Super Member LPA Super Member

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    I like it alot, but i'm sorry you didn't have had a nice youth. I recognize jeremy in it, I like alot. :)
     
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    Chris Luke

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    Thanks man. I couldn't think of anything to write then Jeremy poped up.
    I used that song as a bridge and built up on it.
     
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    Inkybro

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    I'm really not into this kind of stuff but I think it throws a point into people's heads and shows them how some kids have to live you know? And just because I don't LISTEN to this kind of stuff doesn't mean I don't like it, I think it's good and you really got the point across.
     
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    Mechanical Christ

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    America is really f**cked up.
     
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    Michele1

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    I really, really like it :D espechially "daddy didnt give a ####" ... reminds me of my sperm donar ;)
     
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    Omar A

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    Man I love what you wrote

    Great Job
     

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