Blood, Booger and A Bunch of Idiots

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    Atsuzen

    Atsuzen Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Ficcy

    Mm, wrote that about a year ago. It's a fan fiction for an anime called Gensomaden Saiyuki. Review, please!
     
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    Messy Marj

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    :lol: i like it!

    First it was a bit confusing for me, cuz i'm not that good in english. But it's clear now.

    hahaha, Goku is my favourite i think. He makes me laugh with his 'bloodie-thing'. :lol:
     
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    Atsuzen

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    I wrote this when I was in a REALLY hyper mood, hehe! That's why it turned out like that. When I'm hyper, it's kinda hard for me to make sense. I talk crap, literally. But the ending part was not really good, because I left it hanging and continued it after a month or two. Hmm ...
     
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    Mechanical Christ

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    Don't end it anymore, it's a super ending. My fave part is



     

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