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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Jamie, May 20, 2004.

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    Jamie

    Jamie Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Another forgotten memory, another forgotten love
    Another step closer, to the edge, and I'm breaking
    One more question, without a reason
    One more drop of blood to sell your soul
    Give me another reason, to slow the heartbreak
    Direct me to the source of your concieved child

    The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
    Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
    The forever darkness of suffering

    A sunlight of a cursed corpse, laying stained on the ground
    A forgotten memory, a fallen love
    Another step closer to the edge
    One last gasp of air, and I'm struggling
    One more drop of blood to sell your soul
    Give me another reason, to slow the heartbreak
    Tortured winds, slip through my grasp

    The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
    Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
    The forever darkness of suffering

    Fallen angels line my route
    Burned souls, scattered ashes

    Scarred lives, ruined in the night
    Tearing my feelings apart

    I'll walk a thousand miles
    Just to see the twinkle in your eyes

    The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
    Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
    The forever darkness of suffering
     
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    Scarlet

    Scarlet Well-Known Member

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    That's a very great poem. It has a lot of strong words. I really liked it. :)

    My favorite part was:

     
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    Jamie

    Jamie Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Its the chorus to the song:)
     
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    Atsuzen

    Atsuzen Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Uhh, song or poem? :unsure:

    Anyway, it's nice! I like the words you used. :lol:
     
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    Adam

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    cool
     
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    Omar A

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    You've got talents.

    You were inspired by Lp weren't u :lol:
     
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    Jamie

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    Erm...rather unitnetionally..but I do recognise the line your on about ;)
     

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