"The Tulips Bloom In The Dimmest Light" Yesterday my hope finally failed me As the mid-summer rain poured down And drowned all the sanity in me While choking every breath I tried to take I tried tearing away from the red But then I was taken in again As daylight broke on my torn heart Soon my skin began to crawl When I heard your name ring out The hair on my neck stood on end When August passes this time around I'll be doing more than just existing Bitterness is all I can offer to you Sorrow is all I can offer myself Sympathy is all anyone else can offer you Sadness is all anyone else can offer me The stars are bleeding in the sky tonight While the man in the moon cries out Clouds fall from the atmosphere While mountains slowly start to crumble The tides rise faster with the tears of the moon Earth and land quake beneath my feet I scribble my last bit of poetry in the sand It reminds me of all that I had Your face resonates even in the dimmest of light And your smile illiminates even the blackest of nights I'll start bleeding being without you soon Then and only then will the tulips start to bloom When the waves crash down on my heart When the sky comes falling down I'll wonder why I bled for you When you never bled for me June never felt this hot before July only looks to be hotter The sweat rolls gracefully off my chin While my blood boils in my vains My skin peels off my face My ears ring out with the sounds of the silent When August passes this time around I'll be doing more than just existing Your face resonates even in the dimmest of light And your smile illiminates even the blackest of nights I'll start bleeding being without you soon Then and only then will the tulips start to bloom Your face resonates even in the dimmest of light And your smile illiminates even the blackest of nights I'll start bleeding being without you soon Then and only then will the tulips start to bloom Beyond the embrace I can't see your face This God awful place Speeds up the pace Then my heart stops All of my thoughts My stomach in knots The life in me rots Yesterday my hope finally failed me As the mid-summer rain poured down And drowned all the sanity in me While choking every breath I tried to take I tried tearing away from the red But then I was taken in again As daylight broke on my torn heart Soon my skin began to crawl When I heard your name ring out The hair on my neck stood on end When August passes this time around I'll be doing more than just existing Your face resonates even in the dimmest of light And your smile illiminates even the blackest of nights I'll start bleeding being without you soon Then and only then will the tulips start to bloom Your face resonates even in the dimmest of light And your smile illiminates even the blackest of nights I'll start bleeding being without you soon Then and only then will the tulips start to bloom Beyond the embrace I can't see your face This God awful place Speeds up the pace Then my heart stops All of my thoughts My stomach in knots The life in me rots
Amazing. I like this one alot!!! Yesterday my hope finally failed me As the mid-summer rain poured down And drowned all the sanity in me While choking every breath I tried to take I tried tearing away from the red But then I was taken in again As daylight broke on my torn heart Soon my skin began to crawl When I heard your name ring out The hair on my neck stood on end When August passes this time around I'll be doing more than just existing That's the best part, imo.
Wow. You've really got some talent in writing, Will. Bitterness is all I can offer to you Sorrow is all I can offer myself Sympathy is all anyone else can offer you Sadness is all anyone else can offer me The stars are bleeding in the sky tonight While the man in the moon cries out Clouds fall from the atmosphere While mountains slowly start to crumble The tides rise faster with the tears of the moon Earth and land quake beneath my feet I scribble my last bit of poetry in the sand It reminds me of all that I had Me likes.
Will, I think he meant if you wrote a SONG, like with guitars, drums, bass or something... Did you? BTW, GREAT WORK! :whistle: