Reflectionless Ghosts

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    Will

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    "Reflectionless Ghosts"

    Love broke you
    The trials were all in vain but you press on
    Not knowing what there is to gain
    In all that you've failed
    Now you've come to realize
    The truth around you outshines all the pain
    I've heard all your promises
    Your supposed reasons to wage your war
    Yet I haven't seen anyone bearing arms in your name
    Only those bearing arms against you
    Yet you'll use your golden tongue
    You'll say just what they want to hear
    And you'll bring them to fight on your side
    Unjust it seems but you'll win them over
    After a while they'll grow tired
    Weakened from sneaking across plains and hills
    To fight the battle inside your head
    Nothing makes sense about you anymore
    Too conceited and locked up inside your own thoughts
    To see that you're ruining these people as well
    They say ghosts don't have reflections
    You my friend are no exception
    There's no inner beauty about you
    Nothing to be captivated by
    And your face bleeds its dischord
    To cover up for the hatred you hold for yourself
    Too bad you're beautiful
    Just wither away
    Real beauty is forever
     
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    Alacrity

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    I've said it before and i'll say it again: you're a very talented writer. That was really good ^_^
     
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    Andrea

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    Excellent job, Will. :)
     
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    Thanks for the comments.
     

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