...As The Last Timberwolf Cries Out To The Moon

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    Will

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    ...As The Last Timberwolf Cries Out To The Moon

    Now I'm done writing songs for you
    I'm done wasting words on you (you)
    I sleep alone in spite of this
    Among the shadows of perpetual bliss

    It's worthless, discard it, throw it away

    And I'm through writing songs about
    All the nights that I have lived without (you)
    I sleep better in the dark
    The pain inside has finally left its mark

    It's worthless, discard it, throw it away

    Every night when the sun sets
    I lay awake in a pool of regret
    Each day seems to pass me by
    Quicker and quicker, in the blink of an eye
    Lately it seems that all I've done is choke
    Back the tears because I know I have to cope
    It's my own fault I locked myself away
    Instead of just saying what I had to say

    Sometimes I just wish I could fly
    So I could leave this place and not have to try
    To live my life the way I did before
    'Cause I just can't deal with the stress anymore
    Now and then I try to find away to slip away
    'Cause every now and then there's only so much I can take

    But I'm done writing songs for you
    I'm done wasting words on you (you)
    I sleep alone in spite of this
    Among the shadows of perpetual bliss

    It's worthless, discard it, throw it away

    Can you hear them screaming your name
    And stepping on everyone without any shame
    Those are the nightmares inside my head
    Clawing and biting at every thread
    That holds my emotion together
    Floating through the wind as light as a feather
    Consuming all my sentimental thoughts
    While the last life within me begins to rot

    Sometimes I just wish I could fly
    So I could leave this place and not have to try
    To live my life the way I did before
    'Cause I just can't deal with the stress anymore
    Now and then I try to find a way to slip away
    'Cause every now and then there's only so much I can take

    But I'm through writing songs about
    All the nights that I have lived without (you)
    I sleep better in the dark
    The pain inside has finally left its mark

    It's worthless, discard it, throw it away
    There's nothing more I should have to say
    My life's fallen apart and there's nothing I can do
    Except stop writing all these songs about you
    Forgetting about the past is harder than it seems
    When everything about you just seems to gleam
    Fake smiles surround me all day
    But nothing aroudn me can make me happy today
    Trying to change the past will never work
    All that I've gotten is a wink and a smirk
    Every time you look at me I feel you pierce me
    You're eyes burn so intensly and fiercely
    The emerald green turns to ruby red
    And I can feel another part of my insides fall dead

    I'm not writing songs about
    All the nights that I have gone without
    I'm through writing songs for you
    And I'm through wasting words on you

    Sometimes I just wish I could fly
    So I could leave this place and not have to try
    To live my life the way I did before
    'Cause I just can't deal with the stress anymore
    Now and then I try to find a way to slip away
    'Cause every now and then there's only so much I can take

    Now I'm done writing songs for you
    I'm done wasting words on you (you)
    I sleep alone in spite of this
    Among the shadows of perpetual bliss

    It's worthless, discard it, throw it away

    And I'm through writing songs about
    All the nights that I have lived without (you)
    I sleep better in the dark
    The pain inside has finally left its mark

    It's worthless, discard it, throw it away
    It's worthless
     
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    Alacrity

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    :eek: Another amazing song by Will. I can really understand how you feel, it's a really good song. It would be fantastic set to music, I bet.
     
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    I'm guessing this is about Connie. :( Damn dude.

    Regardless..10/10 for your awesome efforts.
     
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    Wow :eek: . Will that was amazing and very touching :(
     
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    My favourite from you so far

    Great Job Will
     
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    Thanks for the comments.

    I'd like more, though. Because I'm greedy.
     
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    I am like speechless....no words can describe how amazing those lyrics are. It really made my chest go tight (in an emotional kinda way, not asthma or anything like that lol)

    I really liked

    'Can you hear them screaming your name
    And stepping on everyone without any shame
    Those are the nightmares inside my head
    Clawing and biting at every thread
    That holds my emotion together
    Floating through the wind as light as a feather
    Consuming all my sentimental thoughts
    While the last life within me begins to rot'

    That was my favourite part

    Again....amazing stuff ^_^

    EDIT: ooops this isnt syphon is anyanka2040.... syphon never logs out and we are on the same computer so sorry for the mix up
     
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    here you go,its the same old stuff, you hardly ever break away from talking about a person, and how you feel about them, usually angry and such. the one poem about how god did you wrong was tight, becuase it broke the mold, and you talk about lp
     
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    Maëlle

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    Your song makes me feel all weird and I don't like this feeling! I shievred when I read it and now it's just as if I'm about to cry.


    This is definitely your best song so far Will and it must have been emotionally hard to write....
     
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    here you go,its the same old stuff, you hardly ever break away from talking about a person, and how you feel about them, usually angry and such. the one poem about how god did you wrong was tight, becuase it broke the mold, and you talk about lp [/b][/quote]
    Um...why did you even make that post if all you did was complain? :rolleyes:




    Thank you OTHER people for your comments.
     
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    tkd_rap

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    some one cant take constructive critisim...which is what i gave :whistle:
     
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    :unsure: Um... I don't mean to be a b*tch but a few of those lines look very similar to lines from "The After Dinner Payback" by From Autumn to Ashes...

    I'm not saying you did it intentionally though. Maybe you should consider revising it so they're not the same. The rest is pretty good though.
     
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    Damn. Another case of tabula rasa. I hate doing that.
     

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