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    arT saveS

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    In You

    gods/devils/angels/hells/evil/demons/worship/spells/curses/prophecy/lies/torment/none of your words could ever be worth it

    can i beg for something not bought/before my soul collapses, and i rot/before the ends come and truths revealed/that your real and my fates sealed

    pain/suffering/war/famine/dying/murder/children/crying/blood/souls/loved ones/buried/i cant take your truth/if truth is what is killing

    can i beg for something not bought/before my soul collapses, and i rot/before the ends come and truths revealed/that your real and my fates sealed

    tears pass/yet feelings hide/your angels have been screaming/tears pass/yet feelings hide/no matter what i hear/there's no believing

    oh, but perfect one, how can it be/ive been praying, havent you been listening



    Prisoner of Misery

    reach down into the depths of your soul/pull out what you are/victim of misery/controlled by sin/face distorted/evil gleaming

    it spreads like a disease/fear creeps, it crawls/engulfing my dreams/swallowing me whole/no bravery left-its all empty/so i get on my knees, i pray/but the silent wish i make not awake

    silenced-mind closed, heart cold/desperate-killing, murdering

    solitary thoughts roam my head/filled with thoughts never to be said/lost words, nothing to say/lost alone, victim of misery

    misplaced-created(why)/defaced-denied(cast aside)/left behind/no more gates for me/no golden roads/no wings/no trumpets playing to fierce angelic battling/no one cares for me/good/victim of misery

    consuming my inner peace/reality sets in/my dream is obsolete
     
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    Will

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    The first one reminds me of Mudvayne. The second one is just awesome. Good job.
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you. :)



    Mudvayne is my favorite band ... although I didn't mean it to sound like them. Hmm ...
     
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    Omar A

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    Awesome Job. I especially love Prisoner of Misery. Keep writing
     
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    Jamie

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    Prisoner Of Misory!!


    Its awsome
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you Omar and Broken. :)
     
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    Casual D

    Casual D I WON'T BE YOUR CASUAL D. LPA Administrator

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    Very impressive! We have some truly talented writers on these forums.
     
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    That is beyond awsome. Keep up the good work I like your writing skills. I hope to see more soon. :)
     
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    arT saveS

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    Wow, thank you both.

    Those 2 [songs] are some of my favorites, and I won't lie, I thought they we're good, but I didn't think I would get this good of feedback. Very much appreciated. :)
     

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