dark clouds cover the sky Darkness covers every soul that passes by Light rain starts falling Peope start running acidic drops touch evryone melting them as if they had touched the sun in teh middle of the melting skin In the place where no one should have been sits a kid watching the surrounding screams covered with the image of his dreams drops fall on him, but he's still dry However, he wishes he could close his eye But he can't. he's stuck to see people melt, with no way to flee Darkness falls then starts the rain But the rain can't erase the pain Acid, poison, blood, scars and burns All these happens when teh wheel turns Watching the blood in the pudddle the kid cannot even shudder He wants to run, he wants to hide He wants go go away, to be outside But he can't he's stuck, he's still has to hear every drop spill every sound it makes him scream Another thoguht, another dream he rain goes on to infinity untill the kid can finally be free Darkness falls then starts the rain But the rain can't erase the pain Acid, poison, blood, scars and burns All these happens when teh wheel turns The rain finnaly stopped No more sound of drops No more scream of pain no more clouds of rain no more life and no more death just the kid in the depth in the puddels of blood and skin Please, wake me up, mut be a dream! he can move now, but he stands watches around, screams for a chance but chances are dead, so-s everything else This is teh apocalipse, this was his death.
Woah dude! Really good work! A few grammatical errors maybe u should edit. "in teh middle of the melting skin"
I'm seriously, this is really, very good! But what Glenn said, maybe you should edit the grammatical errors, it would become more flowing to read. If you know what I mean. great work.
but anyway....i'm really surprised u liked it..i posted this somewhere else adn gotr a pm from a stranger that sai'd i'm screwed up:|