Breakdown You mother fucking bitch You came into my world as a no one Then you soon became my someone Someone that I could never have Now I kick myself all the fucking time You’re somebody else’s—not mine You’re someone I could never have I don’t care what you wanted I just wanted you Shut up, you little bitch I don’t care now I don’t care what you wanted I just wanted you Shut up, you little bitch I don’t care now It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face The time has come for me to put you in your place It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face Now I just need to find a way out of this place (Bitch) [song break] I always saw you as a castaway Now I’ve got nothing left to say Since you started fitting in here And now it seems you’re friends with everyone Except me—where did I go wrong? I have no reason to stay here I don’t care what you wanted I just wanted you Shut up, you little bitch I don’t care now I don’t care what you wanted I just wanted you Shut up, you little bitch I don’t care now It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face The time has come for me to put you in your place It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face Now I just need to find a way out of this place (Bitch) [song break] Can I stay in love forever? I wish I could but I’ll never be able to Could I say that we’re together? I wish I could but I’ll never be able to Can I stay in love forever? I wish I could but I’ll never be able to Could I say that we’re together? I wish I could but I’ll never be able to BREAKDOWN [song break] [solo] [song break] You came into my world as a no one Then you soon became my someone Someone I could never have And now it seems you’re friends with everyone Except me—where did I go wrong? I have no reason to stay here I don’t care what you wanted I just wanted you Shut up, you little bitch I don’t care now I don’t care what you wanted I just wanted you Shut up, you little bitch I don’t care now It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face The time has come for me to put you in your place It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face Now I just need to find a way out of this place (Bitch) It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face The time has come for me to put you in your place It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face Now I just need to find a way out of this place (Fuck you) [song break] It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face The time has come for me to put you in your place It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face Now I just need to find a way out of this place (Bitch) It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face The time has come for me to put you in your place It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face Now I just need to find a way out of this place (Fuck you) You’re in your place now, bitch -edit- Typos.
Very angsty, I like it. Except the line "It’s true, the way I feel was promised by your face." is a Linkin Park line as well if you forgot. Everytime I read that I think it's their song. But besides that, very very good. Nice emotion.
It's quite possible he could have been influenced by With You *shrugs*. Artists do it all the time, Evanescence sampled a line from Metallica's "Fade To Black". Overall it's a different song for you Will and I really enjoy it. I was a bit shocked by the "You motherf*cking b*tch" opening line. I was like.."Damn, Will's pissed!" Nice job though, I wish I still had my creative energy so I could write as much as you.
Some may find it shocking but I find it amazing! While reading it I was ' Sh*t, Will's going to murder someone by the end of the day' Don't stop to write, Will, you have a lot of talent!
That's really good! I like how u put where the song breaks cause then I can hear the song in my mind better. Some of the lyrics are a little immature but it is still very well written! :rawk: