Kill Me Now

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    Anya

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    I worked for DAYS on this song. This is one of my absolute favorites. It seems scary to me though that I actually wrote this. But I do like it, so review!

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    -Kill Me Now-

    kill me now
    I trust no one now
    no one but myself now
    hate me now
    forget me now
    shut me out and kill me now

    I know you're there- stop following me
    stop torturing me I don't want it
    I can't stand these stares
    these taunts
    these laughs
    these following eyes- so haunted
    you're laughing at me I can't take it anymore
    imgages of the past- and what happened before

    hate me now
    hate me now
    I've got another old cut
    new cut now
    forget me now
    betray me now
    there's no use for living but dying now

    I live to die
    I live to hate
    put on this world to shame disgrace
    no need to live
    no need to dream
    I'm lost in one anyway- or so it seems

    I want to be buried in my own death
    there's no place else i'd rather be
    buried in my black darkness
    for no one else to see

    every moment
    ever day
    I wish it all would go away
    you're never here
    you're never there
    but forget it all I don't care
    so just..

    kill me now
    kill me now
    throw me away and let me die here now
    kill me now
    kill me now
    kill me now..
     
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    That's Great! You should organize it as a song and list like what the verses and chorus and bridge are.
     
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    Yeah. But I have a problem with know exactly where to put them, so that sucks.

    :unsure:
     
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    w00tles. Hot poem Anya, I love it to pieces.
     
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    Thanks Derek. :)


    Anymore Comments?
     
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    w00tles??? :lol:
     
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    That's what I was thinking. :lol:
     
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    Who exactly is it about? Because it can't be about you...... :mellow:
     
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    It is.. It was from along time ago kinda. It just took me a while to finish up.
     
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    Sue Mark. He's the one who came up with that crazy 'w00tle' idea.
     
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    I like it..very cool.
     
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    Sue Mark. He's the one who came up with that crazy 'w00tle' idea. [/b][/quote]
    :lol:

    Whatever you say, Derek. Whatever you say. :whistle:
     
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    Wow! thats an awesome poem...


    w00tle! (w00t)
     
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    Thats really good anya. i love it. :D
     
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    Thanks everyone. :)



    *waits for more comments*



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    I like the drama.
     

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