This is a verse in a song im in the process of writing, its really short because its nowhere near being finished, I just want you tell me what you think so i can see if im going in the right direction My Song It seems as though I’m always living in the past; then I stop and realize the present is moving too fast- I can’t hold on as my life is spinning out of control. I’m not the person I once was; I think I’ve lost my soul- I was so full of life, so full of happiness, but then the darkness crept in and now I’m so depressed in life, and time, and even in this rhyme I can feel- The dark thoughts that plague my mind…. What do you think?