Fade Everyone talks about a heaven and hell But in reality I can't tell If there's a difference or not Why are you saved and why do I rot? Why do I have to live in misery? Is love just a conspiracy? What is light and what is dark? Watch the light fade Fade into darkness Obscuring my vision Watch it fade You left me alone You've darkened my spirit Where is my white light To take me away? You can try to run But you can't hide from the light of the sun It will shine on you But no matter what you do You can't change who you are You've stolen the guiding light of the star That leads me where I am today Watch the light fade Fade into darkness Obscuring my vision Watch it fade You left me alone You darkned my spirit Where is my white light To take me away? I'm sorry But you are still a part of me And as you fade from my memory I feel you breathe And that's what kills me Watch the light fade Fade into darkness Obscuring my vision Watch it fade You left me alone You darkened my spirit Where is my white light To take me away To take me away To take me away To take me away Fade Just Go Sometimes I wish/For a chance to start anew/Back to the days when I didn't know that you/existed with out me/and that I was by myself all alone with insanity/No hope for a life to start/No hope to fix a broken heart/No hope for a chance to breathe in/No chance to believe in/Love ever coming back to me/Romance is just mythology Why do you try to love me Why do you try to care? I'm by myself in my lonliness I'm running far away from here Just go I know you wish/For me to go away/To leave to not spend another day/With you hoping I would see/The fate you've given me/Solitude eternally blessed with anger/Your life is now in danger/You have no hope for life to start/No hope to fix a broken heart/No hope for a chance to breathe in/No chance to believe in/Any part of you being spared/That's because I never really cared Why do you try to love me Why do you try to care? I'm by myself in my lonliness I'm running far away from here Just go Why don't you just go Go away back away from me Don't you know There's nothing here to see Despite how you try To care of love me back It's all a lie Go away back away from me No hope for a life to start No hope to fix this broken heart No hope for a chance to breathe in No chance to believe in
i liked um, cept the bridge to the second song is a rip-off from LP "go AWAY! GO! TRY TO TAKE THE BEST OF ME!' "Despite how you try" can be said by LP "No matter how hard you try!" other than not half bad, you have music to it, since your in a band? 6.8/10
Actually, I took the bridge from an old song me and my friends had written before I was an LP fan. When I heard LP for the first time and heard those songs, I was pretty shocked myself. I am currently attempting to change the bridge. I really didn't mean to seem like I was ripping them off. I respect them too much. My bad. :chemist: Any suggestions people?
that hapnened to me with a band called Skillet, one of their songs sounds eirily close to mine, yet i wrote my song way before i ever heard it.
Those were actually really good, despite a few lyrics that remind me of LP songs, they're awesome. Good work!