World of Pens

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    LornVourkolakas

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    Your mind is like a unsharpened pencil
    No eraser; just left there purposeless
    And as the others break you to pieces
    You try your hardest to find a sharpener

    Here you are, in a world of pens
    The lonely pencil with no owner
    It's not your fault you've been rendered useless
    It's not your fault you're naught to the world

    You don't know what your predestination is
    You don't know if you even have one
    You don't know if there's a reason to go on
    You don't know if anyone even cares

    You're just a pencil stuck in a world of pens
    So alone, it all seems to be meaningless
    Thinking about just ending it all
    Thinking about dematerializing
    That is, until you find your sharpener
    And that, you will, my friend
    Everyone has their sharpener
    To sharpen you and give you a reason
    To give you purpose and direction
    To let you prevail in this world of pens
     
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    Casual D

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    ^_^ Very clever, nice poem.
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    Thank you. :D
     
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    i think its awesome. like your other stuff. ^_^
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    Thank you. :D
     
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    That was interestingly.. awsome! I like your idea's wow. :lol:
     
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    very nice! creative ;)
     
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    cool poem.
    clever idea
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    Thank you for your comments. They're greatly appreciated. ^_^
     

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