I just wrote another song, took 2 nights to finish it. That's very rare for me because when I start a song I finish when I start. This is the first time i've wrote something that's taken more than a day to finsish. Anyways, tell me what you think. Echoing In Myself [Verse I] I knee down before my sentence Waiting until I’m judged on that day Hoping to find answers that I’ve always questioned I always carry more than I can handle Fighting harder and harder until I feel stronger And I know that piece of me will never get weaker [Pre Chorus] I feel so ashamed of what I’ve become I feel so unaware of what my destiny is I feel I’m walking the other way because it makes sense [Chorus] I try to make this real Into something as only I can want Echoing in myself I try to take this blame Into something as only I can feel Echoing in myself Never to be heard on the outside [Verse II] I crawl on the floor on my own tears Wanting someone to dry away every drop Resisting to rest in peace until I find serenity I’ll give everything I have to restore this life Praying and praying until I see more clearly And I know where ever I go; it’ll end the same way [Pre Chorus] Until the darkness covering me fades away Until the light far away moves more closely And until this life that I live makes more sense [Chorus] I try to make this real Into something as only I can want Echoing in myself I try to take this blame Into something as only I can feel Echoing in myself Never to be heard on the outside [Bridge] There’s a pain inside that echoes in myself There’s a hate inside that echoes in myself There’s a secret inside that echoes in myself There’s lost time inside that echoes in myself And I know the outtakes are always the same [Pre Chorus] I want so much of everyday to show more of me I want so much of fortune in life to belong to me And I want so little of the ache to get it all [Chorus] I try to make this real Into something as only I can want Echoing in myself I try to take this blame Into something as only I can feel Echoing in myself Never to be heard on the outside [Ending] Everything kept inside Always echoes in myself (x4)
Not bad . If I just feel like writing and dont have motivation it can take me like up to a whole night. But in extreme cases, like "Under A Bleeding Sky" and "Inside Your Cutting Eyes" both songs we're influenced by sudden experiences that I had been forced to go through. Even though the songs were about two completely different girls. :whistle: But I thought your song was pretty good, good job. I can tell you took a long time.