"Shattered Glass"

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    tkd_rap

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    [Version 3, maybe one or two more to come]

    [v1]The crumpled picture falls from my grasp/ and hits the floor/ my face hid in my hands [tears roll down] / as memory strikes again/ laughter echoing in my brain/ tormenting me reminding me/ of the better days with you/ when your smile out shone the sun/ when your prescience was all I needed to live on/ but it’s just a memory now/ a time that the past wont let me forget/ a time I grow to regret

    [c1]Now Every time I see your face/ I see a love I lost/ I feel the pain/ I taste the shame/ looking through your shattered glass/ seeing a faint picture/ there is nothing left of me/ left alone to wither/ to remember

    [v2]The crumpled picture faces me on the floor [your face haunting]/ the picture twisted in many directions/ I never new who you were/ your unscratched surface the only part of you/ you ever let me see/ but on the inside laid the real you/ too scared to let it out/ you pushed me away/ feeling lost and frightened of your own self/ you ran farther away

    [c2]Now Every time I see your face/ I see a love I lost/ I feel the pain/ I taste the shame/ looking through your shattered glass/ seeing a faint picture/ there is nothing left of me/ left alone to wither/ to remember/ to feel helpless/ oh how I tried to see you/ only to fall on my face/ wondering if I will ever really new you/ if I will ever really know you


    [v3]Now if I come close/ I’m cut by the glass/ don’t know just who it is I am talking too/ can’t let you fall to the past [but should I?]/ your mind so confused as your cold fingers/ scribble down what your going through/ suicidal thoughts spill out/ saying you want to break free of your chains/ take control/ feel your soul once more/ but silence takes over again/ as the world around you starts to break/ you feel like your just one big mistake/ within you shatter/ you fall to the floor!

    But then I say/ just/ FALL AWAY!
    [2X] I can’t grasp your pain/ FALL AWAY!
    I can’t mend your soul/ FALL AWAY
    I can’t kill your bane/ FALL AWAY
    I can’t free you/ FALL AWAY

    [Ending] Fall, fall/ fall away
    Fall, fall/ fall away
    Fall, fall/ fall away
    Fall, fall/ FALL AWAY!
     
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    Crawler

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    Hit the floor?
    Faint?
    Pushing Me Away?
    Farther Away?
    *loool*
    BUT! I love it!!! Think we´ve going trough the same sh** ;)
    Cool. Very cool...
     
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    tkd_rap

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    lol never noitced that....i will have to change the wording a round a bit then i quess, thanks for pointing that out
     
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    Madias04x

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    F*ck man! That was an awesome song! 10/10
     
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    Casual D

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    You have a different style of writing, one that deserves a compliment. Good job :D.
     
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    10/10 ^_^
     
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    tkd_rap

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    thanx guys for the comments B)
     

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