Shattered Dreams

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    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

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    VERSE:
    The birds glide by carefree
    Sand sifts through my feet
    Time is sure hard to beat
    Life's taste is bittersweet

    But as the doors open wide
    Pain and fear subside
    As I'm looking to confide
    You couldn't deny I tried

    CHORUS:
    Put my feet in to the ocean
    Oblivious in the moment
    Not cherishing it, consoling
    Not feeling this, holding back again

    The shadows lurking quietly
    Let out their gleeful screams
    Knowing that the veil they set
    Has shattered all my dreams

    VERSE:
    The watchmen up above me
    Throwing rays of braying light
    Pay little heed to what I need
    They only stop at night

    Why doesn't anybody care
    If I end up in pools of tears?
    Have I wasted all my years
    With perception like twisted mirrors?

    CHORUS

    BRIDGE:
    Don't worry, someone will find you
    Don't worry, they'll save you soon
    Don't worry, someones behind you
    Don't worry, you'll catch up again (X2)

    SOLO

    OUTRO:
    Expected people to lift me up
    Carry me to refuge once again
    Instead shadows lurked behind me
    Dragged me down as the birds coast by
    Watching them fade into the night
     
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    Methybrea

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    Any comments or criticism would be appreciated! :)
     
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    Glenn

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    That's great! Very vivid!
     
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    Nowhere Kid

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    I agree! That's very well-written, you're a talented song writer. ;)
     
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    Methybrea

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    Thanks a lot, Nowhere Kid and DuffsterLP! :D
     
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    lpaddict

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    WOW! you are very talented. please keep posting your stuff-i love it. best one i've read yet!!!! :)
     

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