Perfection Through Silence

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    Will

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    <div align=center>Perfection Through Silence #2

    The shadows fall all around me
    I cannot see and to see at all would be maddening
    The darkness holds a frightening secret
    And knowing it would lead to regret
    It is hard to know as the dark ends up killing thunder
    I can only stand here and stare in wonder
    What lies beyond me in the shadows of the night?
    I can only dream about again seeing light
    As the wind howls through the trees
    Everything around me ceases to be
    I can hear the creeping footsteps of death
    Slowly coming upon me and I can feel its breath
    The shadows have taken me down
    I can feel them pulling me underground

    Perfection through silence
    Is what the light offers instead of violence
    But death knows no good
    And darkness wants that to be understood

    My life is taken away again
    As the beginning ends and the ending begins
    Storybooks and fairytales burn here
    Where evil lives and does not hear
    The cries of the children missing their stories
    As their parents tell them not to worry
    But the shadows of the night could care less
    As they reach up to the children and caress
    Their souls with their bloodstained fingers
    To upon the children let evil linger
    The window slowly opens and a cool breeze
    Enters the room to keep the child at ease
    While the darkness slowly steals
    Away from the child everything he feels
    And locks it tight in its jar full of nothingness
    And as the breeze leaves the room in a mess
    Darkness curls back under the bed
    And the Sandman begins to rest the child’s head
    For another night of torture and death
    In Hell after the child’s last breath

    Perfection through silence
    Is what the light offers instead of violence
    But death knows no good
    And darkness wants that to be understood

    The light cannot combat the evils in the shadows
    When the sun goes down it is sent to the gallows
    Where it is killed for yet another night
    Only to be resurrected in fright
    Of the darkness overtaking the entire world
    And grasping everyone in its evil unfurled
    When the sun stops shining
    And the children stop their whining
    The darkness will have won
    And an evil reign shall have begun</div>




    I know that it is totally different from the demo that I posted a few days ago, but this is the real theme that I wanted to go for with the song title that I chose. Leave your comments!
     
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    Maëlle

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    Creepy! But I think it's really beautiful! Ergh, I'll be dead scared to go to sleep tonight! :wth: Anyways, continue to write, I really like what you do, I think it's really deep!
     
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    Can I borrow your writing skills? Please? Just for a day?



    I'll do anything!
     
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    Pure perfection, Will. ;)

    Excellent job.
     
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    that gve me chills. it is so awesome. keep at it you have something goin for ya. i give it a :) 10
     

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